This is such an interesting story, the character interactions and banter had me smiling. This is a really fun story and I really do hope to see more. Keep up the amazing work!

I have come far and wide, looking for good anime-verse Lillie fanfics...

Firstly this is a rather interesting take on Ash's Alola journey! And also a great reversal on the honestly cliche and overused betrayed thing. God knows how many of those I've had to read in search of a good pokefic.

Anyways, dialogue is great, the interactions especially more so. The banter between the characters are genuinely funny while also staying in-character. If I had one complaint though, it's that there's... only five chapters.

But seriously, I really like this story. I see that it's been updated somewhat recently, so I'm holding out hope that there's more on the way!

So, yeah, that'd be all for now!

I hope we get more of this soon.

Shoot, I didn’t notice when you started this story. I’m glad you updated, but hope it doesn’t take too long for your next chapter!

I swear I read the beginning premise of your story, where Ash’s friends get together and have an intervention for him, before. But in that story I think he went the brooding mountain top training route, which I’m glad yours didn’t. I’m looking for award to seeing where this goes—you seemed to handle the intervention itself well, it could have gone badly. Keep up the good work!

Good start like to see where this goes and to the guest who reviewed about harems and polygamy he's got some stuff right but others wrong first there's no difference between having a harem and polygamy to have a harem means your practicing polygamy people just don't use that term when it's a small number. Now he States harems of any size usually have girls with no character build up and they come they bang and then leave/disappear as a fact to describe harems but that's not true that's just poor writing on the authors part when either he/shes skill is not up to match the hardships of writing a harem and the amount of members of said harem are just to high and quality begins to suffer or they were one off girls who aren't part of the harem and belong in the one night stand category so you can't say that's how harems work when they don't infact work that way hell I've read a many of harem fic/books where all the girls are not only present but show character growth so basically take any advice with a grain of salt from him

Muy interesante.

i agree with your thoughts on the anime. i felt like this is something that should be put on the show. hope you can keep writing

Great ideology you are working with, hope to read more soon

It it take long for your story? Noted you started in 2017...hope can be more soon. Wouldnt mind if theres some even more rarer shipping for Alola, almost feel like Mallow could be like a sister to Ash. They do seem similar at times.
Please come back quick!

If possible can you make it ash x Mallow because it's not very often we see them paired up together I do like Lille she's definitely one of my favorite characters but I want to see Mallow have a chance since Lille has more stories where's she's paired with ash while Mallow has less than what Lille has that's just my opinion I don't mind it's Lille if she ends up with ash I'm just more interested seeing him end up with Mallow this time

It lives!

Yeah the Sun Moon anime has an interesting concept going in but kind of puttered out after a while for me. And the battle junkie that I am wasn't satisfied with what battles we got over the seasons.

Still, have fun going forward. Ash fumbling around to to teach feels like an nice start for his sabbatical.

I like the byplay between Kukui and Lillie here. The contrast between Kukui's Kukuiness and this Lillie that feels more like a mix between game and anime lillie is really cute. I wonder what Lilie meant by her being a representative from Aether Corp. though. Is it actually her job and not some cover story?

Looking forward to any more you put out. Happy Writing!

I can't wait for the next chapter.

An attempt at reverse betrayal, but it wasn't planned out well. He doesn't leave his pokemon for a rest, he leaves them to live there. All his pokemon together, and with each new region, he wants more. It was Misty and Brock that convinced him, or more like beat that into him early in Johto when he crushed everything in his way with Charizard.

Damn! Things got serious real quick!