Reviews for Zephyr
animefreak112097 chapter 62 . 11/5/2018
what you need to complete this story. What happens.
selmasemlan chapter 26 . 9/15/2018
Kina maybe, kindness the first thing that came up
ScarletEmpress2017 chapter 60 . 1/10/2018
Holy GOD, I was not prepared for that preposal!
Portgas D Caroline chapter 35 . 8/3/2017
NO DAMN YOU!
BlackTiger1948 chapter 23 . 7/24/2017
You could have done without the gay section.
if you don't believe in being gay, don't tolerate it.
stand up for yourself and just say no.
Fangirl282 chapter 26 . 6/26/2017
Hi! I actually saw the sequel to this fanfic and it lead me to here, my little bro has autos too so I was curious about how this story would go, even though there different types of autism its pretty relistic. I've never seen a character with autism before ethir, so thx for writing this fix with Lina and not giving up on it even thou its been a while since then.
Guest chapter 43 . 5/3/2017
I don't mind the Quinn relationship, but I'm glad you ended it the way you did. I don't care if it's Kaldur or Quinn, but it needs to be one. This isn't a story based all about the romance, it's a story based on young justice as a show, so I think you ended the relationship well. And you made it clear that it's Lina and kaldur. Or as I like to call it, kaldurina
Lena0613 chapter 62 . 4/5/2017
I knew this was coming but I'm in still heartbroken for her.

Just wanted to say a few things about this book as it's completed and I love to do a big review.

Your book is simply amazing. You capture each character great and you make me miss the show even more. The chemistry between Lina and Kaldur is amazing and when they FINALLY got together it made me really happy. Lina is a great addition and I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter of her life.
~All love and thanks. Lena
unicornmeat3 chapter 62 . 3/31/2017
WHY MUST YOU GIVE ME THIS MUCH PAIN! It's amazing but omg my heart. Poor Lina, I really hope she figures it out or at least goes after Kaldur and joins him as a part of the plan. It would get really interesting if Alina were to be pregnant in the middle of all of it. That would spice things up for sure. Also, does the team know about their engagement? Please write again soon!
Guest chapter 60 . 3/30/2017
Yes yes yes! I absolutely worship this chapter. Seabreeze for one, Seabreeze for all, Seabreeze forever! (Reads note at the bottom) Nooo! (Starts sobbing) Not downhill, why producer who made Young Justice be so evil! Please let Lina and Kaldur have their wedding first.

Your loyal reader,
Guest
Blank Core Devil chapter 60 . 3/29/2017
I still like villian kaldur i wonder how the marriage will survive with that going on hope nightwing leaves zephyr out of the loop if not then well answer me this should I stop reading now if you plan on having lina know about false artemis death kaldur secret agent
Guest chapter 59 . 3/29/2017
Can't wait! This chapter was just so cute! Seabreeze for the win!

Your loyal reader,
Guest
unicornmeat3 chapter 57 . 3/27/2017
OMG THIS IS AMAZING! (And I'm from Canada too!) please update soon I love Seabreeze so much and I want to see how Lina is going to mature as a person when she takes her protege. Please update soon!
gossamermouse101 chapter 57 . 3/26/2017
Woooo Lina gets her protégé!
Blank Core Devil chapter 57 . 3/25/2017
you need to check your wording and put some type of break seriously a it went from breath to batman then theres take her on as your mentor near the end
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