haha, Yamatos, I didn't even realize this was yours! no wonder it was so good!

that was fucking beautiful! I couldn't stop reading! such an intriguing and compelling story, and it was very well-written. very nicely done

I cried so hard over this but I loved it

The end is so sweet !
I like this one a lot !
Best,
Coraz

This story is very original, I am truly enjoying myself.
You have wonderful ideas !

I'm very pleased with how things ended. What a beautifully written story. Thanks Brazil and Mongolia for everything! Corazon was too involved to think clearly... I totally thought Law was going to kill himself too, though. I'm so happy that they are together now. I really love this one, the style you used really is fantastic! I could read tons more of this... Thanks for sharing! Keep up the great work!

This is fantastic! I absolutely love the way this story is told. I love that Corazon talks to me, the reader. This is dark, which I love, but still has a light child like side. This is also a perfect set up for CoraLaw. Corazon and Law are very in character and the other Deaths are very interesting, who's under those hoods?! I love how Corazon and Law have sorta become obsessed with each other, and I'm not even sure if they've noticed themselves. I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!

You had grasped a person's view of death as one grows older. Law in his younger years has much enthusiasm and hope for his future hence, doesn't want to die yet. However, as he grew older and had understood a deeper meaning of life, he finally realized that death is not that bad after all. Although it's quite amusing how he suddenly took a course for a medical degree. A boy who escaped death many times had finally got a call to help people in a way that they can live life longer with a healthier life.
Quite ironic how Dr. Trafalgar D. Water Law died in a Waterloo Station. I see what you did there :).
I love this story so much. It is so well-written. It is only two chapters long but it is concise. You manage to put me into different emotions while I am reading this. Though I am still not into CoraLaw thing (since I always view them as like father and son relationship), I have to say that I am so happy that things turn up better in the end.
Thanks for this wonderful story.

Even as Death, Corazon is still as clumsy as always. It's fun reading the interactions between the boy-who-don't-want-to-die and the Klutz of Death.

aw great ch :)

love

Aside from the fact that this story should probably be rated M I really enjoyed reading it! The Death system is pretty cool and I like Corazon as a sym0athetic reaper. Funny and thrilling, nice job.

Nice job. A tight, well-written story! Thanks.