great

This looks promising. I would prefer it if you don't make bashings excessive. While I am hoping for no pairings (especially no harems), if you do decide to do so, please choose a girl his age and unpaired in canon.

While I am hoping for no pairings (especially no harems), if you do decide to do so, please choose a girl unpaired in canon.

A good start. You've seen my criticism on it on reddit, so I'm not gonna repeat it here. Just want to say to keep at it and write the story YOU want. Its the most important rule to writing.