Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I stopped at wives.. plural

Greatest line I have ever read in a story " Whoever had planned this latest cluster fu** needed to suck start their blaster pistol. "

Awesome work

maris brood should have grey skin, not red. her eyes and horns are supposed to be red though.

Technically with the Green Jedi of Corellia, there is already a precedent for Jedi couples to exist, considering the fact that they are the only Jedi sect who still practice clan/family making. That's, of course, without taking into account the other Force-user sects found throughout the galaxy, both dark and light.

Bloody awesome story, thank you!

Dude, if you're "old enough to know better" you're old enough to fucking spell correctly, and use commas. Fuck me, this reads like a brain dead four-year-old wrote it.

I wanted to like this. I really did. The original challenge has spun out some interesting stories, but the "hero egg" nonsense was ridiculous. Even if they absolutely had to pop out a replacement population for the untold trillions of egg cells, there's a fucking genetics planet that cranked out a shit ton of Jango Mk 2s. The technology exists in that universe. No need to "cook quints" or whatever that was.

I don't like you vilifying religion, religious leaders, and holy cities.
learn to write more neutral works.

Fantastic job, I specially liked that Harry bothered some of the prudes in the jedi.
Congrats for the fic, was very Good.
Greetings.

P.S. In another matter, I wanted to ask you what hapened with your other Harry Potter stories, at least I swear that you have or had more tan your profile says, like one about some girls transforming in battle ships or one about Longbottom fighting Hermione because she was changing the goverment of magical Britain.

The word is "dragged" you lazy writer. That Author's Note just makes you look lazy. You should take anything you're writing seriously. "Oh, I don't consider fanfiction as formal writing so I'm not going to use proper grammar." Stupidly lazy thinking, that is. Your story is pretty good so far, if somewhat predictable in some of the plot. You have a recurring plot in Harry/Everyone or at the very least, everyone has at least one kid from Harry. Anyways, not my point, I'm trying to not be mean, but you attacking your readers like you did with that AN in the middle of a chapter set me off. The readers, at least some of them, are trying to help you make your story better, you stupid ***. If you don't like the constructive criticism that they're giving you then just keep your damn mouth shut and keep writing the way you were without attacking the intellect of the readers trying to be helpful. Especially because your other stories have the same damn problem in them and you don't say a damn thing in those other ones.

Frigging egotistical morons like you p*** me off.

Definitely another fun chapter

I wonder if he is just life stuff or a crispy critter like in the movies LOL

Another really great chapter