Reviews for National City Will Burn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() now we know what Heatwave does on his days off from crime or saving time. please have more of these. this is cool. |
![]() ![]() this chapter would be a great netflix promo for the show seasons to hit netflix |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story needs a sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you make Kara visit Mick on the waverider and Mick brings Kara to Krypton on another earth |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice comments on Sara's gaydar and the Legends response to how close Mick and Kara are. It would be an interesting dynamic to explore in the show. Keep up the great work and may the force be with you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was the loveliest of finals! Thank you for this wonderful sotry |
![]() ![]() Hahaha, not 100% to my taste but still a VERY amusing story. Hope you make up one with Leonard Snart meeting Kara, that'd be even more hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Winn made an instant friend who him drunk off his ass, awwwwwwww so cute. The only the bar scenes could get better is when Mick eventually gets into a baroom brawl/barfight. Keep the up the good work and may the force be with you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I am loving Mick's adventures |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story so far! The order of Chapters 2 and 3 kind of threw me a little, but other than that, no problems. You've really written everyone in-character, and I LOVED Mick's interactions with Alex and Maggie especially. Now, what's this incident with J'onn and Mick that happened at the DEO? That's a scene I'd like to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maggie and Mick as drinking buddies would be scary to see when they eventually get into a barfight. Good dynamic between those two. Keep up the good work and may the force be with you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just keeps getting better and better |