Needs updated. NEXT CHAPTER! lol

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I love all of the fairytale landmarks. I hope you're okay during this covid-19 crisis and I hope you update all your story soon. peace and long life

I do hope u continue this story. I want to know what happens I have read the whole story in 2 days. I love it. U are very talented. I even followed the Facebook page but no posts since 9-2019. Are u continuing

I’m actually crying right now cuz I can’t read more can’t wait for the next update

More?

wishing their was another chapter as this story is awesome.

Still enjoying this story, wish it had continued. I still have hope as I saw you do still write.

This story never gets old. I've reread it a couple of times. I seriously hope you continue it.

This story is awesome! I really wish you continue it someday!

Please update soon! :)

please come back! It has been so long! also could you do a time skip so Naru and Shikamaru can finally get married/ bonded.

the concept is interesting but the execution is wack

despite all the changes canon wise and oc wise, everything is the same essentially when it shouldn't be. how is it that naru is still as hurt when shes clearly better and smarter than canon naruto at the same time but ends with the same results.

i never did understand how no one thought to report kabuto in canon. like, how the fuck did a mere genin have all this info and no one thought it was odd. especially when it seems info like missions and techniques/stats are confidential