Reviews for The Woman in the Picture
Jazzhy chapter 35 . 11/18/2019
Great story!
FallOutBean chapter 35 . 5/29/2019
Hey I've read the whole story in like two days, it's really sweet! Loved the scene in their NY apartment one evening and in general the little things with Luisa. Just the right amount of cheezy and drama here over thirty chapters! *thumbs up*
inmymadeupworld chapter 1 . 5/16/2018
thanks for sharing this loving story. hope you can write more stories.
agentzakura chapter 15 . 3/28/2018
I'm like mid-chapter, but I have to say... I love how you just sprinkle the other Pitch Perfect characters into relevant pieces of the story. Lily's introduction was great XD
JustAWriter1103 chapter 1 . 2/7/2018
Great chapter, there some grammatical errors, but nothing too bigI really liked it, though
Kasia143 chapter 35 . 9/28/2017
Awesome story, you could work a little bit on proofreading but I really liked it. I'm so intrigued who Amy is! Like, could you maybe write a one-shot in this AU that would explain everything? That would be so great! Thanks for sharing the story with us!
Bechloe-Diakko chapter 35 . 9/7/2017
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh! That ending was just so perfect! I loved everything about this story. Proof reading could use a little work though
177-8 chapter 35 . 8/20/2017
A very fun yet sweet story. I thought we'd find out who fat Amy was though. I'm going with the granddaughter of the inventor of something dangerous or embarrassing so there's a shell corporation that keeps their family name quiet.
Chris chapter 35 . 8/14/2017
I waited until the I read the whole story to post something.
The first 30 chapters I know the writer was talking about Becca but to refer to her as a hobbit was disctracting. Becca is not that short so i feel it took away from the character by referring to her as such.
There could have been more to describe the sec scenes but after reading the whole story it might not have fit in so well. I also feel that the ending mostly the last two chapters were a little bit rushed. But this story did inspire me to want to write some fan fiction of my own. I'll give it a try on a later date. As a whole it was definitely well written. The writer did give away where they were from with the way the person made them talk. If the writer ever has anything new to post I would read it as well.
Thanks for the story.
chronos136 chapter 35 . 8/12/2017
ARG THE FEELS WHY MUST YOU DO THIS GAWD I LOVE IT! That was an awesome story and I loved the creativity, the drama, and the all around original idea that your story was. One of a kind and one hell of a read. Great job!
bechloeorbhloe chapter 35 . 8/6/2017
Okay, I was putting off reading this, because I didn't want this to be over. It's so good. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
twistie2512 chapter 35 . 8/3/2017
hi, love the story. will there be anymore chapters?
ulquiorra31 chapter 35 . 7/21/2017
Amazing! I think it's the best end to this story, it's exciting and sad at the same time because as I said before this story is over, I know you said that you would not write anything for a while, but I know that when you come back with a new project it will be the same Or better than this. Congratulations on being a great writer, keep going and hope to hear from you soon. Many greetings.
Guest chapter 35 . 7/20/2017
Love this ending.
Itsjustafangirl chapter 35 . 7/17/2017
I hate that it's over, but thank you for this killer story. I'm going to miss this popping up on my updates. It always made my day
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