| Reviews for Heartbeat |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 4/5 Awww… that last bit was so cute! |
 FearlessLeader-Leonardo chapter 2 . 5/16/2018 Awww! I just, the feels are sweet ~ I love it. |
| Akimii chapter 2 . 12/16/2017 Awwww Brotherly fluff :3 So kiiiiute |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2017 AWWWWWWWWWW OMG CUTEST FANFIC EVER! |
| Nutella Swirl chapter 2 . 8/29/2017 This was... this was amazing! So sweet! |
| Daria Dixon chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 Awww cuteness! :) |
| ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 Awwww...this was beautiful! Especially the last little part! |
| Pheonix09 chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 Awww that was wonderful and adorable too, I loved it and excellent job That last scene actually made me cry a little but it was sweet and cute and that Raph leo moment was perfect, thank you for writing this _ |
| dragonslayer111 chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 I love it UPDATE SOON |
| BubblyShell22 chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 An awesome ending to an awesome story. I'm so glad Leo and Raph patched things up and the flashback at the end was the cutest thing ever. Nicely done on this. The Bubbly One, Shell |
| fieryheart959 chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 Not only do you kill me with feels, you go and kill me with turtle tot feels! |
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 5/31/2017 Yep that's mother hen Leo; poor little leader, always blaming himself for everything bad that happens to them and never letting the bad go; he will break down eventually and Raph will be there to lift him up, just like he did with his coma, just like he always is. I'll say it again, Raph is an awesome brother; always the family protector, always That was one of the best I have read, nicely done but could you write little scenes from Raph's recovery, maybe a Raph Leo moment or two please? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2017 I like this story please continue |
| KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 You have gotten a reputation of a "heart breaker" on Fanfiction?! Well I'm not going to lie I can how. ;-) Yet that's what makes your TMNT stories so beautiful. It brings true emotions to the readers. Leo's soft laughing telling Donnie "Raph is to stubborn to die" Fearless you better believe it! Raphael (to me) is like a teddy bear. He can heal/help his brothers in all the needed & beautiful times but also in his angery moments harm/hurt them intentionally or not. Being the second eldest means when Leo is out of commission it's that leads. |
| Celeste38 chapter 1 . 3/14/2017 Raph really is too stubborn to die! This was very sweet. I loved how Raph willed himself to live for Mikey's sake like that! I also loved how you showcased Leo here as well. Very much doubting himself in his new role in the family, while still dealing with the very fresh hole in his heart over their mututal loss of Splinter Really, really loved the "Hear my heart? As long as it's beating, I'll never leave you" parallels between this pair. Very lovely! Wonderful job, as always! |
