Great chapter, loved reading it!

Great end for this. I was wondering how Donna would interact with Carrie in this series and you did it perfectly. I can just picture Donna keeping an eye on Oliver to insure that Carrie doesn't come anywhere near him during the party.

Great chapter. Please update soon :)

Felicity will then hack into the matrix mainframe so that these people suffer eternally for ever daring to notice how weird the Olicity thing is, to the level of obsession. I'm not say a healthy relationship is bad, I'm saying Olicity can be toxic, while pretending to be sweet.

So cute

Can u pls add a sequel to this. I just love this town and it’s very sad but realistic way of life.

Great story!

I love this! Thanks for writing it!

Any chance of seeing Donna’s reaction to the neighbours?

Can you write a chapter or a story about them visiting felicity’s mother?

really good! thank you! n.n

Great story, thanks!

I sure hope the Muse will encourage you to write a third chapter about the neighborhood's reaction to Donna. Oh how I'd LOVE to read that!

I'll be dead honest and admit that this fic made me slightly nauseous. It's well written, certainly, and your narrative is clear and crisp. However, I feel you might have overdone the Olicity fluff, to the point of making them completely OC Mary Sues'. The characters are flat and predictable, with no grey area, just good and bad. You'll notice that the show thrives on stretching the grey area. That's what I love about Arrow, and it's really missing in this story. I think a hint of darkness would do wonders. HOWEVER, let me stress that this is a personal opinion. Most of the other reviewers seem to love your fic, so it's probably just me. Either way, thank you for sharing this, and I hope to see more

Omg, this is great! You should write a chapter when Donna arrives in Ivy Town hahha