This has to be the best fanfiction I have read. So many characters, so many plots... all so well written. Wow. This is really really good.

Hey, are you planning the same plot you left in AO3 or this will be a different one as sixteen chapters were already there

I like this story so much because of the politics and the intrigue. Keep it up

Doesn’t matter which universal is it. Rob still use his dick not head. I love your story it’s interesting reading. I am just not big fun of Sansa and Jon paring.

great chapter.. it's good to see an update on this story.

Excellent chapter. I understand Daenerys' decision, but felt she was lacking understanding of the effect it would have on a new wife of one of the potential fathers. A quiet word to confirm, in confidence, the truth, could help to foster better relations between the two women and Jon.

That was very good; it seemed so long yet I long for more. Glad to see you’re writing again

Well written! Also interesting timeline.

As good as it that you published Conquest on Fanfic, its a shame some jerk tried to plagiarize your idea.

Still its good to have Conquest here on Fanfic.

First off you do a good job at establishing the the Dark Order, along with Prince Jonarys. You do show him a war weary warrior and commander you once again it facing the grim reality of War and the costs how much death will bring peace. Not pretty, but sadly true.

It does make me wonder if the Dothraki in this verse a stronger compared to their canon counterparts, since Dothraki hordes have had the Targaryen Empire rival with and constantly combat.

With the transition to Winterfell with Sansa's POV, you once again show your are on the best Sansa writers I have seen. You do capture her strength and both fragility all at the sametime, with her comforting Rickon as they find out about Ned's death at the sametime her guilt about her father death being caused by the Lannisters. Makes want hug her.

A Realm where all of the Seven Kingdoms are still independent must be war ravaged place. The Reach and Dorne tearing eachotherpart, Iron Islands revaing to their hearts content, The Westerlands haviing an alliance with the Stormlands, with King Tywin and Cersei pulling the Mad King Joffrey Baratheon strings. Overall probably just as bad as it is in canon.

I can particularly just feel the tension between Jonarys and Aegon. A Classic Brother vs Brother conflict.

This is a fantastic story, one which I have thoroughly enjoyed from the moment I picked it up. I hope to see an update soon. I have a feeling about the trustworthiness of the Sand Snakes (biding their time, & Viserys doesn't exactly inspire trust) & whatever Aegon did when he visited Dany will have repercussions too. Jon's wish for a quiet life will remain just that, I feel.

Really love the level of world building and effort you have put into creating the AU.

Are there any lemons in this fic?

Loving it! So excited for more!

One of the best song of ice and Fire fanfic

So nice!
See you next chapter!