So we have Yume in this fic. Makes a guy wonder where Musubi is although one can guess. The fight was interesting in how those four worked it out. With Akitsu, you can do some stuff and see how that works out. As for the other bits, I wonder how Kagari will make some things work.

Not to speak about Uzume. The sooner Minato wings her, the better. As for Miya, scary as always and I hope Minato will learn. Miya does make a point although she is wrong about the number. Three sex starved Sekirei aren't the only ones he gotta worry about it.

As for Takami, looks like she got a serious shock. Those two her son's first Sekirei. That's gotta hurt for a bit. Her reactions was gold btw. But maybe, it will give Karasuba something to worry about. Takami doesn't joke around.
Saluut.

So it looks like Minato got himself a new Sekirei. Should have guessed that from the title. One who will treat him radically different from the way Karasuba treats him. You certainly had an interesting fight worked out between them. It had a nice and tense work up. We also got Uzume teasing Minato which is also nice to see here worked out. I like those bits.

With Uzume. We also learned a bit of her situation regarding Chiho. Strangely, I feel a little bit disappointed but one can understand her reasoning. In any case. It won't be for long before Minato got himself a third Sekirei. I hope you'll update this soon. I really like this fic.
Saluut.

A Karasuba X Minato fic. I recall reading one which I surprisingly liked reading. Even so. The take you got on this was nice.

So they are still staying at the Izumono Inn and luckily Miya nor Karasuba are in any mind killing each other. And you got Kazehana chasing after Minato as well. I like. This is going to go be good to read. It will also give Minato a Sekirei who does not treat him like a pet. And you got Uzume as well which is great for me as I see her as top waifu material.

With Minaka. I am surprised she knows that he's Minato's father but who am I to complain? Pity we won't see Musubi here. Even so, I can't wait till we see Takami's reaction.
Saluut.

Well shit, kagari is now winged, I really liked her, and akitsu went with the brat too, so sad.
And yume is alive here, so maybe musubi is not :'v

Holy shut karasuba is crazy xD but starngely enough I don't hate that about her, it makes her quite unique too haha, can't believe it took me so long to keep reading this story tho, most probably I didn't fav and follow it for some reason.

Dude, you have to update this story. Its amazing

yay finally you updated haven't seen you in ages man how you been man been a while scene you and I spoke on discord it's good see you update and can't wait for uzume to get winged

This story has a fresh take on a lot of things that have already been fleshed out in a lot of other stories and was refreshing to read. Kazehana doesn't hate Takami here which was refreshing, Miya is a bit more loose with things and actually seems to be more of a woman here than just an all knowing, overbearing inn owner. Things seem to be a bit shifted but yet a lot of the core things remain the same, subtle and believable changes are what makes this story great. Not to mention the lore is a bit different, like Yume still being alive, Karasuba with Minato and also seems like Uzume will be as well. I'm interested to see where you take this story and what you have planned. I hope to see you continue it as it's a great read so far and that's getting more rare and rare with Sekirei fics, especially with these characters still being true to themselves.

Thanks

Ooooooooh, shit... Yume?! Seems like DLC is active this playthrough. Also my poor man Minato is showing some signs consistent with Stockholm/Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, wonder how he's gonna cope.

Great update. Keep going great story.

RP

good story
what is the history behind Karasuba and Yume? When is Minato going to make Uzume his sekirei?

oh shiet! we got an update.. and its a good one too!

Great chapter. You really nail down Karasuba and Kazehana's personalities correctly and mesh the two of them well together. I do hope you add Akitsu to the mix, she deserves better than that imbecilic child.
On another note, I really hope you update your DxD story soon. I need more AkenoXIssei lovin', and hopefully Xenovia and others down the line in that story.

Great Chapter!
So in your AU, Musubi doesn't exist and Yume still alive?