Reviews for Little Bits
Anguis Reginam chapter 2 . 12/10/2017
Ohhhghh th8s was so gosh darn good.
erikabalaclava chapter 2 . 8/8/2017
Love this story.
werwolf-yasya chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Wonderful story, thank author.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 5/8/2017
Tom is a nasty freak. I think he officially fell in love with harry when he killed his father holy hell. And what was with that ominous ending story? I don't think I like the implications. Also I almost felt sorry for Nott I mean he's been feeling all alone like harry tho i dont know his story, but to feel like harry is ignoring his existence when that's all he's done himself since harry got there when they were kids? Bullshit. Don't dish out what you can't take man.
Eimana chapter 2 . 4/24/2017
this... twist in the end. Damn... you genius. This was so sick and dark... just beautiful wow. This story earned a fav right there.
halfblood hufflepuff chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
This was so dark and twisted I love it! What was the foreboding words "maybe I'll start earlier next time" supposed to mean? I love the psychological thriller aspect to this; all the men in the household lusting after Harry and going crazy- that was both horrifying and thrilling! I did not expect the father to go mad like that and for things to escalate so swiftly. But lol Tom takes the cake; like that graphic sex scene was disturbing! I got chills :D Also I'm wondering if Tom wanted Harry the first time he met him? Ohhh but is his fixation with Harry's forehead (petting, stroking, kissing) a clue that he really wants Harry's soul? Thank you! I love this!
Minari chapter 2 . 4/1/2017
This story was darkly and disturbingly beautiful, and the end left me with a creepy unsettled feeling (in a good way). Thank you for sharing this.
CuddlyMakani chapter 2 . 3/27/2017
I loved this! It was a beautiful story.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2017
I love this! I would also love a sequel ;)
Shadoween chapter 2 . 3/25/2017
Interesting , can't wait for more
Vindictive John Dark Fantasy chapter 2 . 3/25/2017
That was a hot malicious story I loved it
TheSoundOfWings chapter 2 . 3/25/2017
Your story is really good! I love the characters and the AU you have created. Tom is completely IC and now you gave it such a fascinating twist. So this is Voldemort? And somehow his last shard of soul was transported to this world into this particular Harry?
Mongruad chapter 2 . 3/25/2017
The ending is the most unsettling part of this story. It makes me wonder about the truthfulness of Tom's feelings. Was he pretending? I don't think so - he seems to accept Harry's refusal, don't mind it even. Then the mentioned "next time" raises many questions.

I'm not sure also if I should interpret the last scene as literal falling asleep or death, end of this reality and starting. It's vague to such extent that it becomes sinister.

Harry seems very gullible, malleable. And weepy. I don't like that characterization. It makes him irritating and not impressing protagonist.
Vindictive John Dark Fantasy chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
I love this new story already it's perfect excited for more
Shadoween chapter 1 . 3/22/2017
Love this concept , can't wait for more : I love the way you made the characters .They suit very well, poor draco though didn't make it past chapter 1 , wonder if Theodore will die as well ...
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