Reviews for The Great Lynel Hunter |
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Marx Avian II chapter 5 . 10/20/2017 Has potential to be a great story, but needs a lot of work. Please think about getting beta readers to help you put your story together, or other writers to give you tips on writing. |
theawsomest5 chapter 7 . 10/19/2017 Much good want more. |
Ebrima -Xander chapter 1 . 4/11/2017 Interesting! The only things wrong with this are grammatical issues here and there, and there are no line skips when a new person speaks. Keep writing, you're great! |
Chaosblaze94 chapter 8 . 3/28/2017 good story but the chapters are too damn short |
2ndUzukage chapter 6 . 3/26/2017 The scene with Seggin and the cookie reminds me a lot of one of the old episodes of Johnny Test. |
Majora6295 chapter 1 . 3/24/2017 Thanks for the great Chapter! |
ZeldaFan chapter 3 . 3/22/2017 I like how you change the MC's name between Razalak and the shorter version Raz, it makes it a bit easier on the ears than the same solid name being spoken again and again. |