super, please finish your stories xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

first as a american "" how can you Misspell "Christmas" in chapter 1
second you are missing words in your sentences and your gramatic is horrible.
a good tip is to reread your story out loud word for word.

So does his magic feel bad because it doesn't like him stealing or is it because the wand was also made from his parent's bones and an imprint of them is sort of interacting with his magic and approving nor disapproving of him when he uses it to steal?

Also, I don't think it's jack fruit that stinks. You might be thinking of durian, which looks similar to jack fruit, but smells bad. Tastes bad too, but some people like it.

mario plants

stupid dumbles

nice birthday

nice planning harry

good twist

nice start

I wonder what Harry will be like when he reaches Hogwarts.

Awesome idea! I look forward to seeing more of this soon.

Liking the story, keep it up. Problem is, you cut alot of your sentences short from completion. Like, what's the little girls name who he got his chocolate cake from, the one he wants to meet? There's several more sentences like this in your story, but this one was the only one you couldn't guess at your meaning correctly and it made me curious enough to comment on it. Again, cool story, keep it up, it's good.

Crack fic huh. Well I'm all for it. As long as magic is guiding him it looks like no end in sight to what Harry can do. lol
Looking forward to another chapter if the muse strikes.

Interesting.

I have to disagree with your premmis. I think in the context of heaven and hell a moral barrier exists. We are not guaranteed a pass to heaven. Hell is our only guaranteed (or default if that is more understandable) destination. I'll read your story now before I post this review in case I wish to add to my review. - You need a better understanding of English writing rules. There are numerous errors that a non English speaking person might make. This site is a good place to practice but it is subject to brutal reviewing. You might have an English speaking person read through your story and point out problems. - Your "time turner" character isn't getting to heaven I hope, as I don't think inadvertent charity qualifies as the decision to live in love and charity with your neighbor which is necessary to break heaven seal. Likewise, Harry nor any of the Dursley's make the cut based on this action as their individual decisions are what is required and the unearned "earthly comforts" might actually implement an entitlement frame of reference in Harry's mind which could very well negate the charity necessary to get to heaven. It seems to me clear that good works, intention or accidental, will not do the trick. Good works are only the evidence of a changed hart.