| Reviews for Naruto Reborn (Re-Writes) |
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   bella.beau.14 chapter 9 . 2/9 love it |
| Seros109 chapter 9 . 7/26/2019 This story is really good. Especially the Anko the Sensei of Naruto and Karin is. Why does Sakura not just apply for a transfer? Then at least she would finally have a real sensei permanently! The contribution of Keito was awesome. Another bastard, because you can hate him even more than Sasuke! And that says a lot about Keito. Hope the story continues. |
| Midnight Lost chapter 9 . 7/19/2019 Too bad there is a massive hole in Keito's plan to accuse Naruto of raping Sakura and such. The Hokage would just have to bring in Inochi to invade his mind to confirm the accusation, and with the action never happening, well, that plan is going to back fire. ANyways, looking forward to when this gets updated! |
| Dragonman110 chapter 9 . 5/1/2019 Update please. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2019 Ok so good so far but some of it came off as jibberish. Might have been rushed or something but you should probably fix it up a bit or ask someone to help with that. |
| Spidey2 chapter 9 . 1/27/2019 Keep going! Love this! And I hope Keito gets what he deserves; a good chopping off the ol’ block! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/24/2018 I'm sorry but there's too much rape in your story. So much that it gets annoying. |
| Chue19 chapter 9 . 12/1/2018 I liked the story but i thought it was a harem but even if it wasnt its still nice and i like this story hope you countine |
| Dragoncyber22 chapter 9 . 11/19/2018 A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story. |
| Lolmax chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 meh |
| Donthedarkdragon26 chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 hey when are you going to update man? its been like FOREVER! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/31/2018 You are using the wrong words, such as "there" when you should be using "their" or "they're.". You are also missing lots of punctuation, commas and periods specifically. You still use commas wrong in the dialogue making it all seem like a fast run on sentence and need to use periods to separate sentences. Love the story, just hope to see it cleaned up some more. A beta reader wouldn't hurt, if you could find one that is. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/31/2018 Reading through this for the first time, it's not bad. My only issue is that when they talk, the sentences seem to just run on with no place to them. There doesn't seem to be any punctuation other than a comma. It makes the dialogue feel rushed to me. I love the story, it just needs a little fine tuning here and there is all. |
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 9 . 7/18/2018 Welp I can say things have changed a great deal seems Keito is losing it, but Naruto will kick his ass much later when the time is right, |
| thedarkpokemaster chapter 8 . 7/18/2018 some nice NaruSaku goodness seems that this Keito will need to learn that he is not going to get Sakura her heart belongs to another person |
