This was so good! But for some reason I wanted to cry at the end...

You know, this was really good! Most tomione she falls in love with him or merely cowers from him, your version was creative and refreshing.

AHHHH! This is absolutely amazing! I just love the progression of this fic, honestly this is pure gold.

This was amazing, thank you for sharing it !

Wow ! This was pretty dark. I like it anyway, it's been a long time since I read a good time turner fic. I like the way you avoided Tomione romance but still wrote about their relationship. Thank you for sharing this story !

Very glad I reread this. It's just as wonderful as the first time I read it. The characterizations are wonderful, and Hermione is perfectly written.

This was wonderful and so sadly sweet

I really enjoyed your story - thanks for writing and sharing it!

Darn, I hoped for a Tomione happy ending. But this was freaking brilliant, what a story! Wished it was longer, utterly delightful!

That was so good...I got shivers at the end.

PLUMS.

This was certainly unique. Deliciously dark and a little twisted- amnesia with a side of time travel. You just know all of my buttons, don't you? And I'm a real sucker for a Hermione revenge story. The story unfolded so perfectly, I'm surprised you wrote it so quickly! I knew who Jean was the moment she called herself Jean, but it took me a while to get the time right or even realize that she wasn't in the correct time. Most people put her back with Severus, but all the way back with Tom, now that's lovely. I find Tom Riddle stories oddly appealing in the same way that thriller stories featuring a serial killer are compelling. He's a dark and twisted little twerp and I like to see the different faces people paint on him, trying to explain how he ticks, trying to show just a little more than we got to see in the books. I rather enjoyed him in this, his dark and calculated mind zeroing in on Jean and her knowledge and it was actually a pretty good guess, thinking that she was a Seer. A good cover as well.

The scene where she calls out Ron's name. Holy cow, was that a powerful one. The instant rage- at any moment in time, I believe that he would have killed her if he'd had the mind to. It really added a certain edge to the story that made my heart pound even with the emotions coursing through every word.

I liked the ending, how it all came full circle. Amazing how she went all that time and didn't even tell anyone. Breaking all the rules to change the world, but keeping to that one to keep it together. This was truly an amazing story, thank you so much for entering my challenge.

-Liz

Hi there,

This is a very good story. Not only very well written and grammatically correct, but very interesting and original too. I've read quite a few fanfictions over the last two years and quite a few were time travel stories, but this one stands out.
Your take on time travel combined with amnesia and everything else that came after is a great mixture, intense and a bit dark. I felt her desperation and panic and then near-cold planning and execution.
I felt a slight pang of regret, that she didn't go back to her own time line, but then again she has a new life now. The thought of her losses really constricts my throat. At last she's home... a happiness with a hint of sadness.
Great job.

Thanks for sharing
Fox

really enjoyable. and i thought the 'voicing' of hermione/narrarator was perfect for the tone of the piece

Brilliantly written!
Thanks for sharing!

Loved it! Thank you for posting it!