Okay i understand you want Sakura in the harem but what you did was misleading us, i'll you why.

when Naruto said he change who from what he was moving on from the pain She did to him so by right he move on to some thing better, a lot has changed over the past three years. meaning he should not have any feelings for Sakura from what i had read.

So for him to said he still care for her. She used to abuse
Him every chance she got but still have feelings for her. They never went away.

Yeah, I moved on from her and became happy with Rikku-chan and the others here with me now.
But I never stopped caring for Sakura-chan. How could I? Naruto said, a frown on his face.
He felt guilty and it showed on his face.

Meaning he has NOT moved on, this was NOT the way to add her

glad to see Shion joined. I really like this story. I wonder, will they travel back to the land of spring and get Koyuki to fall for Naruto

Saw gaige and i think she might be better for someone else, maybe kagome from inuyasha or lina from slayers would be a better fit

where is the next chapter of this story please let me know

where is the next chapter of this story please let me know

Cant wait for more post soon.

I’m sorry what

Do you know what’s the terrible thing: I can understand Rikku feeling lonely but Yuna and Tidus got together And she was definitely jealous but in official FFX canon they broke up and I’ll admit that’s one of the things I do not like about the written canon media of the FFX series. Seriously I think that’s one of the things Sin suddenly coming back Ending Yuna’s eternal calm I felt they really just didn’t want to do anything else with that serious they kind of f $&ed it up in such a way in the end I love the series but that ending freaking disappointed me.

Nice to see you back in action. Sorry to hear your not well. But it's not exactly unexpected considering Covid-19 is hitting everyone hard. Try to get better soon, covid attacks weakness in the immune system and generally anywhere it can find an opening. Sooner you recover the sooner you'll be safe from it. Or safer than most.

Ya know, I reread the whole story just to get caught up to snuff, which means I also had to look up most of the characters again to be sure I remembered them right. But the moment I looked up zack... I instantly hated his guts. This is the first time I've ever felt an irrational hatred for someone based on their appearance. Even jack from black clover doesn't incite my hate like zack does. I don't even know why I hate his face so much, just something about him that irks me. But like roku said, he's got a nice sword.

The matter of shion was kinda rushed, very little development there and virtually no foundation. Which is something I hadn't expected from you. But considering you were sick while writting this, I'll let it go.

The battle with Moryo was kinda weak and in my opinion I think you should have taken advantage of author rights and given Rikku the spell Seymour could use on Aeons during the confrontation in bevelle, banish wasn't it? I think it would even fit with the whole, only being able to be used on spiritual bodies shtick that the game implemented. Holy is all well and good but it didn't make much sense the battle took so long. I don't remember Holy requiring a charge time before use.

Something I'm curious about. When Naruto begins the process of going to spiral for Rikku think he'll 'miss the mark' and go to one of the alternate fantasies that comprise the ff universes. This would actually be a really good opportunity for Naruto to learn Warp, or Learn OF warp, pending on which time period they arrive in being before or after Arden's big reveal.

Verde blanco y rojo

Well, that wasn't bad not a fan of Shion at all she's a snobbish little hussy asking for Naruto to bare her children screams skank to me but whatever, I am curious as that you don't seem to have Sakura show her opinion or Temari it's always the same ones like usual not that it's a bad thing just strange in a way, I can understand this is going to be a harem but it seems every female he meets wants to be with him, I don't want to come across as being a jerk, just stating my opinion, u did say this wasn't planned, but is Naruto that obsessed with dating every women in the world, can't he say NO, what she asks is outright skankworthy asking for that.

I can't wait for more though I hope the next chapter starts with a lemon between NaruYangBlake lol, NaruSakuTema would be awesome also.

Go get yourself checked out for the virus and rest and recovery we can wait for you to get better

Get yourself checked for COVID-19, since that's hitting the whole Planet right now. Take your time and heal, before writing anything else. We can afford to wait for you to be at full strength to write, since it'll allow you to think clearly.

Much better chapter. Finally we see Temari about damn time. Fox gone so that a game changer. Broke Hinata heart bonus thank you hate her. Overall liked it. Just make sure every girl that goes with Naruto have there screen time. Toki and little Towa won't need screen time unless Naruto go to there world but make sure he visit.

It happening again. We haven't herd nothing from Temari in Towa world. Even Sakura appear for a few seconds but not a peep from Temari. She just left forgotten and author keep adding more females. Story good but not seeing each girl getting there screen time annoying.