I told my friend who’s learning how to play botw music that I think revalis theme and the rito village music is the saddest music in the game and it’s partly bc I love the area and partly bc I think the other champions got closure in the end—they were all able to protect their homeland and avenge themselves and each other—but revali didn’t. he wanted to be remembered as who he was and instead he’s just one of link and zeldas friends. also I think he understood zelda more than anyone else did. the main reason I like the rito music is because of this fic. it goes into so much detail about something the game just kinda wrote off as “here’s the funny one, the mom one, the one who likes link, and the one who doesn’t like link—what cool personalities!” but I think that all the other champions got humanized, and link accomplished their missions himself but he could never change how revali is remembered. revali is really understandable if you think about some guy who’s like 17 getting this mission that everyone else is passed over for, especially when the rito don’t have a ton of respect—theyre mail people in wind waker lol. also, all the other races either live long or have long memories—but I don’t think the rito do. they just have the one platform while daruk got a whole mountain. I guess what i’m saying is that the one thing revali wanted he didn’t get and never could.

In terms of writing your story is excellent however is extremely disrespectful to the character of Link and what he is capable of as Warrior.. he's consistently shown to be capable of taking on armies of monsters and demons.. he should not have a problem combating these soldiers in the story. My two cents

Well, that was quite the story! You did a pretty good job with going into Link and Zelda's mindsets, and how they grew even when apart from each other. (I do feel that Inglis got off too easy with that betrayal at the end, though.) Also love that you managed to touch upon M-rated stuff :P

Alright, I gotta say it here. You have all this Nimosty between Link and Zelda that wasn't there before and makes no sense

Not often you come across such an amazing fic! Decent length, great story so far, perfect grammer... what more could you ask on this site?

This story was extremely good and was very accurate to the events of breath of the wild. It filled a part of the hole that you can’t have a post game and I’m sad that I’ve read it all now. Great work keep on doing what you are doing because obviously it’s right

This has been the best and most beautiful interation of events that could happen post-BOTW. I enjoyed how you excellently captured the struggle of both Link and Zelda with memories and remembrance respectively. I am saddened that this story has now been completed but it will hold a special place in my heart as to what I want to see in post-BOTW story. Thank you for you creativity, spirit, and passion to sharing your story with me

Wow this story was a greaaaaat read, thank you so much for all the hard work that was put into this and I can’t wait for your next story!

This has been a delight to read. Thanks for the story and all the hard work you put into it.

-FlygonNick

That was an awesome fanfic! I enjoyed every chapter, good job!

Hey, ummm. Congrats wow, this was great. I mean you blew my mind the whole thing was just amazing and I am just blown away. You hurt me so much XD. Keep writing please I love the way you write and the way you develop the story. Please write chapter 24 lol

This is amazing; I totally love your story. But they're completely negligent with that slate. Seriously. How could they lose it. To a traitor no less. Trust is earned you know. They shouldn't have had they're guard down with Inglis. Then again, the fact that I need to rant shows how your words are packing a punch. *wink wink*

This is wonderful. You have a tendency to ramble on a little but your world is rich and detailed and makes me think of the beautiful openness of the game world. Also, I like how both Link and Zelda are coping and trying to build a life in the new world. They are rebuilding a relationship and relearning about each other as they move along. Very interesting character development for both.

This was amazing! By far the best fanfic on this website. This is even better than some of the published books I’ve read. If you don’t write professionally already you should start! Such a good read!

All right, so this story was just amazing. I love long Zelink BOTW fanfics, and you just gave us a story with over 230k words. I checked on the net, and it calculated it into 511 A4 pages. That's a whole book! I'm impressed by your writing skills and I'm currently waiting for your current fanfictions to be completed before I read that one too :)

One question though: where is the last chapter where you said you will answer some questions and stuff?