love it... totally in love with your story...so...so
..much...

YES! chu~

Damn, in one world Kyoko marries Tsuna but doesn't love him, she creates an alternate dimension by messing with the timeline, but in the alternate dimension Tsuna marries Haru and Kyoko ends up in love with Tsuna. I love this concept, there is so much irony.

wow, haru is my favorite. it's sweet but taste sour. people got hurt. people care and learn. move forward. good story.

wtf... T_T T_T NTR is trash and is for trash.

My stomach was in KNOTS while I read this but if this hurts, it hurts in the best possible way. It's the best Tsuharu oneshot I've seen in a very long time and is, possibly, the best I've ever read. Everything about this was like a shot to my heart-reading it was like...falling in love. The subtle and slow burn, the unintended slide towards each other after Haru had tried to give up. The quiet jealousies... It's so difficult to capture how this made me feel as I read it.

I also adored your character dynamics, the scene with Reborn was harsh but damn convincing and really made Haru's character transformation striking. The loyalty/friendship with Hibari (who is, as ever, a sadist-but also, surprisingly enough, on a tricky emotional level and not just a physical one) was also fascinating in its own way. I hadn't expected him to meddle and his foreshadowing kept me guessing because I kept wondering, as Haru did, if I was just getting my hopes up for Tsuharu without any real reason. I was half convinced this would end bittersweetly and so am incandescent with happiness that they ended up with one another (even if I feel awful for Gokudera and Kyoko-actually, I kind of think it would be interesting to see these two bond and maybe pair up in the aftermath of this because underneath it all they compliment one another. He may be gruff and she may be softspoken but they have similarly gentle souls, I think they could learn from each other.)

On another note, you really should post these oneshots individually, in the end it's up to you but I feel like maybe you would get more readers because people tend to search via pairing.

Anyways, this was a wonderful piece and I hope you write for these two again. For all that you found Haru difficult to write, you wrote her in an incredibly compelling way.

I love this chapter so much. Especially, with Haru and Kyoya together training. These two are my favoite. I like Tsuna but I really like Kyoya for her. I just don't like Gokudera at all, hahaha. No offense...I kind of happy at least Haru was trying his best to be a fighter. I'm just glad her sensei was Hibari Kyoya. I find them so adorable and cute, hahaha. Well, thanks for the update.

From reading this, am I to understand that Tsuna is the rebound guy for Bianchi?

Interesting concepts and thank you for explaining the first chapter.

Update soon. This is interesting.

Wow !
Wellmade. well written. i felt everything. beautifuk

I don't get it. Seems like in the ends it turns out to be Haru and Tsuna's wedding..or does Byakuran has done something about it? It was confusing actually.

It is rare for a heterosexual KHR fic. This seems promising, although I must admit, the pairing that I am waiting for is 2796 Tsuna and Chrome.