Lol, I was dying when Bella discovered Edward was the uncle, good story, thank you.

awesome story.

Really good

Loved the story. I was a little confused when Edward referred to esme as aunt when she's his brothers wife. I also thought Jasper was Rosalie's brother through most of the story but when I went back and reread I realized that was my mistake. Bella said Jasper was ONE of the brothers and I assumed she meant one of Rosalie's brothers, I even wondered who her other brothers were at the time. Now I realized she meant one of the Cullen brothers.
Edward was sneaky and I think he should have realized Bella might be scared and confused by realizing who he was.
Still, all in all I really enjoyed reading your one shot and thanks so much for sharing it.

This story is hilarious! It it quickly became my favorite when shot ever! It sucks that it wasn't longer, but you did an amazing job :) thank you!

Love It!

that was great please continue

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing these engaging characters with us!

Thanks!

This was good and funny. I figured he was the uncle Rosalie talked about the way he was egging her on about her family. Felt bad for her when he showed up at the party. Story is good and thank you for your time and writing.

I loved this and would love to see a multi chapter of it.

Love it! I can never resist a good Bella and Edward love story.

I loved it!

Is this going to stay a o/s or will it be a story please let me know

I would love to see a continuation of this!