Aaaaa pertemis forevveeeeeerr! Seriously, the fluff was well put, exactly where it should've been, the fight scenes were great, especially where he uses his 1st technique to disarm kronos, and loved the mother/son relationship between nyx and percy(ofc). Needless to say, one of my favourites, tho spare me if i favour perzoë above pertemis(aaa don't turn me into a furry animal pls).

Just finished reading chapter 6 and damn what a plot twist.

This story was pretty good! I had a fun time reading it. I am also happy that (and this is also just a guess) you took the scene from Transformers 3 where Megatron fights Sentinel Prime. Can't wait to see if the sequel is as good as (maybe even better than) this!

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Wait, Percy turned down immortality again? so he's just going to die and leave Artemis alone? That's kind of sad.

This was.. okay.

The Artemis/Percy was definitely too fast, but not ridiculously so. The Michael/Thalia, though, was definitely way way too fast. Took them like two days.

And I really don't understand his decision not to become immortal. Artemis is. So one day he's going to die. And she isn't. Probably ever. If she does really love him, that's going to be actual torture. I don't think the decision was explained at all.

Damn. This is great. At the beginning you said that this would be an "unoriginal story", but in the end, it turned out very unique and sweet. This beats "The Queen's Champion", and if it was slowed down slightly, it would maybe equal legends such as "Troubles with a Bite". I love this.

I wont lie, I don't like stories where Zues is a bad b0i, it's been a fantastic read so far, but not a fan.