You'll probably never read this and it seems this fic has been abandoned, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it. The writing was solid, and I felt that the characters were spot-on. It's a shame it doesn't look like you'll be updating it

Cool story, hope you can continue it soon.

Oh this is so good, plwase update more, ao much tension, so much mixed feelings, ugh! Mah heart, mah soul i need another chapter!

You should have stopped after paragraph 9 and made it very suspenseful

Googled your user name, found the rest.

Crazy good. You're very talented and I'm glad you brought this to this site because I would have otherwise missed out on a great story.

Wow! I didn't expect a follow up chapter so fast.

I'm really enjoying this, although it seems everyone loves doing the angst from Mercy, you're doing an amazing job at capturing their emotions.

Can't wait for the next one!

hey is there any way u can put me in it names andy
i would love to be like the person who save u pllzlz or becomes ur friend later on and helps u in ur advenjures il even give u some ideas and put a word out for u on my utube channel 2 check ur fan fic out plllzzzzz