Aww. I've always liked Viktor! Good to read an update about him.

Very sad how Cho still holds a torch for Cedric all those years.

I love the detail you put into the minor characters! I'm glad that Lee has a nice family and he still broadcasts Quidditch games. :)

I loved this one! Definitely a Deamus fan. I'd like to see a full story about their adoption of the little girl. Very intriguing! :)

These were all very charming! I liked Draco's heartfelt apology, Astoria's backstory, and Scorpius' innocent and cute confession about Rose Weasley. Very cute!

Loving these letters! The apology from Narcissa was very poignant.

Good chapter.

God bless you too! Life indeed happens. I'm sorry about the break ups and other hardships. I hope you're doing at least a wee bit better now. Looking for inspiration ? If you haven't done McGonagall's letter yet, itll be a real heart breaker to read. Hagrid maybe? I've got to go and read it all again I think...this fix and the books. Cheers

This is really nice, you have a way with words, however, all the letters are written with the same style, if from a different perspective. It’s still moving and made somebody start chopping onions, but it felt disconnected at times. The character is not sinking in, when writing somebody, you must also be that somebody.
Bet you can give a hell of a speech though, this is one of the most sentimental pieces I’ve ever read.

Sorry you've had such a rough time, glad that you're back! When I read Harry Potter, Dudley was one of my least favorite characters for being a brat and a bully. Despite this, he eventually turned around and I think he deserves a redemption arc, like this chapter protrays. Seeing a letter by him was suprising, but I enjoyed reading it and him fumbling with how to address Fred!

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Five letters left?! Omg I can't believe this story will be over soon! I've followed it for over a year now lol

Thanks for this story. I really am enjoying it.

My dear author, far be it from me to ever leave a review intended to discourage an author but I must tell you that I am so irritated with this story I had to skip reading this chapter so that I could jump down to the end of it in order to get to the review box and post this message. My problem is this: You are an exceptionally talented writer and this story you have written is one of those types where as a reader you fall off the pages and into the story. That is the best possible thing an author can achieve when writing. I'm sure fame and wealth are quite wonderful too, but a storytelling is meant to entertain an audience. If you had intended to only please yourself, then you need not have bothered to publish it so therefore I am assuming you are hoping your stories will reach out into the world and entertain readers. And this story does exactly that. It is captivating and has pulled me into it immediately - over and over again. Therein lies the problem: 'Over and over again' because at the start of each and every chapter there are the author's notes. The site designer should be hanged for even putting that area there and giving writers a place to comment there on the top of the page at the chapter break. There could not have been worse thing to do because when the reader goes to the next chapter instead of finding out what happens next, they are rudely yanked out of the story and their attention is refocused to another topic. Then after reading whatever is written there, the reader is returned to the story in progress. And it is REALLY ANNOYING! Luckily for you, unlike so very many other fan fiction writers, you, have the talent to immediately recapture the reader and bring them back into the story. But it is a huge disruption in the flow of the story. I do understand that the story itself was not written all at once but because it is all one story, it should be presented as so. I also see that would quite difficult as life does intrude on things and often makes things less than perfect. But readers are reading to escape into another world, to be somewhere else for a little while. I'm sure you have heard it said " "reading a book can take you away" and you are a great captain writing stories that take us readers on a wonderful journey but please, if you could on those future journeys leave the author's notes, comments and other bits until either the end of the chapters or better yet, until the end of the story. And also, only one disclaimer about not owning the rights to all Rowling's intellectual property is sufficient for a story. Chapters may be published at different times but as long as they are included in the story as part of a whole larger work you don't need to reprint it every time. So, now that I have had my say, I am going to return to the start of this chapter and go back to hanging out with Fred and George for a while! It's been an awesome and emotional trip and I don't think the laughing and the crying and reminiscing are quite over yet. Thanks Captain!

Your sorry still gives me shivers too this day