Hey, this was an awesome fic, and I really love how creative it was. Chloe's character development was astoundingly natural in the midst of crisis and it really shows a real lesson too! Well written, and just as a suggestion, maybe a sequel about the fight against Hawkmoth with Nino and Chloe brought back of course, and a Lila takedown in which Chloe and Kim are on team Marinette with Adrien, now having a healthier relationship with Chloe as a brother-sister kind of bond as it's 'leader' . Alya swayed by Lila keeps exclaiming her disappointment at how Mari changed despite all the class went through for her but she wouldn't do something as small as put past her prejudice of Lila for the class, and Chloe and Mari becoming real close in the wake of that. Ladybug is the guardian now but she lets Chat choose the turtle miraculous holder because she had grown closer to her adorkable partner and their trust is as strong as ever. Adrien and Marinette also hang out a lot more after Adrien realised how much she meant to him after Genie. It's been three years since this was completed so I have no idea if you're still online, but I hope you'll consider this idea if you're inspired. Hope you're doing well.
-Melissa

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT. I love that you explored this from the side character’s point of view, which to me emphasized how much Marinette affected their lives. I love the conflict that Nino and Adrien felt when they realized Jade Turtle was essentially a replacement for Ladybug. I especially love Chloe’s arc in which she realises she can do good and learns to be careful what she wishes for. I even love all the small details like Sabine and Tom naming Marinette when they were planning on having a child, how Tikki still likes Dupain-Cheng choco chip cookies, and how the seating arrangement changed. Not to mention, Alya and Kim friendship was sooo something I did not expect to love. This was a beautiful story and I’m so glad I found it.

This was good! I do t find a lot of good longer Miraculous Ladybug fics that AREN’T reveal fics, but you managed it!

It was really refreshing to see a ladybug Miraculous tle told from the view point of someone who isn’t Marinette or Adrien. This story was marvellous, thankyou!

I LOVE THIS. DO I REALLY NEED TO SAY MORE. BECAUSE I CAN'T MEASURE JUST HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS. HNG.

GREAT CHAPTER. ALYA GOING ALL ANGRY. JUST. ASLDKFJAS;LDKFJASL;DKFJA;SLDKFJSL;ADKJF. SHE'S SUCH A GOOD FRIEND TAT

AND CHLOE BEING LADYBUG. AND TIKKI. ***TIKKI***. OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS, SHE'S TOO PRECIOUS, I CAN'T TAT TAT TAT TAT

I LOVE THIS, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS, IT'S AWESOME AND AMAZING AND JUST HNG TAT TAT TAT TAT

Also, I get you with the not editing the first chapters majorly cause they show how you've progressed - we think the same in that aspect and I love it

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND DON'T FORGET TO TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF! LIKE SLEEPING ENOUGH!

YEEESSSS, CHLOE KNOWS, HELL YESS. AND HER KEEPING IT A SECRET. ALSO YES. FREAKING YES. THAT'S MY GIRLLLLL.

NINO AND ADRIEN. THEY BOTH KNEW THEIR IDENTITIES AND NINO IS THE TURTLE. HE IS. DON'T BE DISCOURAGED, NINO, YOU ARE A HEROOOOO.

CALIIIIINE, SUCH A SWEET SWEET GAL TUT

AND YEAH, WHO WOULD WISH FOR SNOW MONSTERS (NOLL, WHY).

Okay, that kinda sums it all up, lol. I enjoyed this chappie a lot, I really wanna know how this ends.

I hope you're doing well! Don't forget to take care of yourself! Like eat and shiz! And keep up the great work!

Okay, I'll try to write down all of the things I shouted out loud while reading this. So here goes.

First - NUUUUUUUUUUUUU NU NU NU NU NUUUUUUU, MY BEE GIRL, FREAKING, CHLOEEEEEEEEE, NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU DON'T BE SSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDD, A;SLDKFJAS;DLKFJS;LDKFJAS;LDKJAS;LDJDF;AJDL

I've learned to love Chloe for the person she could be (thanks to fanon) and I really wanna see her get a *proper* redemption arc. This one seems rushed but honestly, I still love it.

Second - NUUUUUUUUUUU, ALYAAAAAAAAAA, NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU, NO NEED TO CRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGOKAY GO CRY CAAUSE IT WOULD DEFS HURT BUT HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGG, JT IS REAL AND COOL AND AWESOME

I love my DJWifi and hate misunderstandings TuT

Third - FASLDKFJAS;DLFKJAS;DL CHLOE HAS GOT TO FREAKING KNOW, OH MY GODS, YES, PLEASE, HNG

I love the idea of her knowing cause IT'S FUN AND EXCITING AND QUITE UNPREDICTABLE.

Fourth - NOLL, WHY, NO, AAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH

My frustration. In four words XD

But it was necessary! I know that! And you did it well. I really wanna see how this turns ouuuuuuttttttt!

Hope you're doing well! I really still love this! And don't forget to take care of yourself like drinking water and shtuff!

I'M SO SORRY FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO READ THIS SOONER BUT I AM SO NOT DISAPPOINTED WITH WHAT YOU'VE GIVEN US, YESSSSSSSSSSS (But really, sorry for not being able to read this sooner, shame on meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee)

This was an awesome read. I yelled, I screamed, I also sneezed cause stupid nose but THAT DID NOT STOP ME. I look forward to see on how this turns out. I can still remember the whole plot without having to re-read the chapters. I love this story so so so so sosoooooooooooooooooo muuuuuuuuuch!

Also, the pain they feeeeeel. Sorry but I like pain -;

Anyways, I hope you're doing well now! I'm really sorry for not keeping up but thank you for reaching out as well! I wish you luck with school! And don't forget to take care of yourself!

ummm... left of the eiffle tower could be anywhere?

I think it's amazing. Kim is one of those characters we don't get a lot of insight into and this chapter just opens up a lot on his character and I think he's been portrayed purrfectly.

Great story but you didn’t have Chat Noir and Ladybug meet up so I kind of wish you showed a freaked out Chat/Adrien till he found his Ladybug again, because you know Adrien would be nervous and anxious till he saw her with his own eyes.

I think Kim dropping to his knees was a tad too dramatic for realism, but the scene in her room was emotional

I'm really liking how you've got the plot going

This is a really cool idea! The line about the class springing into action doesn't really fit the rest of the fic, but other than that it's good. I love your reason behind Genie, it's very original and completely understandable

Lindo capítulo.
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Nice chapter.