Lol. Interesting meeting. :) Fun mini-story.

Will an Expeditionary Fleet fall through the Warp and appear over Mindoir?

This is interesting! Please continue this!

'Tis be a piece of pure awesomeness!

I really hope you find it in you to continue writing.
It'd be a shame to let this great beginning of an epic story go to waste.

Please continue, the idea of Mass effect dealing with a full Legiones Astartes sounds fun, or even just seeing what the galaxy-wide affects of having a midget Primarch will do to the Xenos.

Can't wait for more.

so is this time travel to the DAOT or did he jump timelines? and are you going to find a way to give him his legion?

Woah what? Okay.. So MaleSheppie is one of the Lost Primarchs and FemSheppie is a niece or something of his adopted parents? This is soooo efffin cool. More please

Nice work on this.

Those Batarians didn't stand a chance.

And what's this? FemShep as well? Interesting.

Keep at it.

Now this is a really weird crossover...and I'm loving it! :D

Shepard as a Primarch, well a dwarf Primarch ;D lol. Very original and entertaining! I loved the line about 'I'm still shorter than my brothers'

Thats my favourite line so far :)

Keep up the good work and please update again soon please! :)

This is like Baddassery incarnated.
I'm loving this, the perspective your've taken is awesome. I'm looking forward to future updates.

Us fans demand more! But if you've been recently faced with any inconveniences then we understand.

That's it. Hold the phone, I'm favoriting this right now. Fun fact, one of the primarchs was two. You may already know this, but the Primarch of the Alpha Legion was actually a pair of twins. Their names were merged into one, and they are for some reason always talked about like they're one person. Ex: "He" instead of "They".

it seems there is another, is this a sister primarch?

so he is a primarch, the question then remains if the mass effect verse is a part of the larger 40k one or not