Your writing is so smooth! The characters felt like themselves and loved the concept and pace of the plot. Thanks for sharing!

Awww~ Dear Black Lion, soothing Shiro.

Awwww So, Shiro and Ryou fought, and kinda are apart? :(

Oh lordy, Ghost mom wrath. Lance, we love yah.

LOL "Disapporving Dad/Leader" face, and Keith caves in. XD

Oh lord, I loved Shiro telling Keith his mom would find him cute. Too funny.

Awww~ So, Shiro loves his stepmother almost as much as his real mom, or in another way entirely. Well, that is super sweet.

I'd love to see how they meet, bond, and what not. That's something, the stepparent, stepchild thing. :)

All these feels! (wraps arms around self, and falls crying.)

Awwww~ I'm crying tears of sadness, poor Shiro, losing his mother. So delirious.

LOL It'd be funny if he told Lance 'I love you, Mother' in delirium.

But I feel sad, 16, or any age, it's horrible to lose a mother.

I feel sad/gut-punched. You did your job. Also, I LOVE THIS FIC!

Fantastic writing: )

I love your headcannons and I love this story even more so. It's very nicely written and it gave me the feels, so that's always fic!