Reviews for RWBY: Fragment of the Moon |
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doomqwer chapter 1 . 7/21/2019 please update |
JapaneseOptics chapter 3 . 7/10/2018 You still alive up in there buddy? |
Jose19 chapter 3 . 7/2/2018 This story is very enjoyable to follow so far since I love both series, and wait until they see the elemental attacks that Naruto has up his sleeve. The big question now is how powerful is Naruto because during the Fourth Shinobi war he became extremely powerful. |
Kratos 57 naruto chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 ng you please continue |
Angels-Vanguard chapter 3 . 10/16/2017 great job man, continue the amazing work. |
Fangy McBites-a-lot chapter 3 . 10/4/2017 I really can’t wait for the next chapter! |
I-R-Stormzz chapter 3 . 9/28/2017 Really hope this is Naruto/Ruby, their just so adorable together! And there are a lot of Naruto/Pyrrha and Naruto/Blake stories compared to Naruto/Ruby already. |
RandomHobo chapter 3 . 8/29/2017 Pairing? Ohhhhhhh harem would be so awesome. But so would Pyrrha, yang, and ruby as single pairing! In that order! |
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 3 . 8/19/2017 Awesome chapter keep it up |
KneeOfJustice chapter 3 . 8/14/2017 It started off pretty good, but I don't really like the way you're following canon so closely. Part of what makes a story interesting is how an author changes what we already know. |
varo chapter 3 . 8/14/2017 genial fic esta muy bueno ! |
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 3 . 8/14/2017 Wonder who his partner will be? :) |
Brehze chapter 3 . 8/13/2017 Great chapter |
The Rupture chapter 3 . 8/11/2017 I suggest you create a team of OC that naruto can join. |
dispair17 chapter 3 . 8/10/2017 A rather slow start, but this story seems like it has promise. It's good that you've shown some indications that Naruto is still traumatized. I'm personally curious as to how that will come out in more concrete ways than just nightmares, but there is plenty of time left for that. It always irritates me when characters simply shrug off what should really be rather traumatizing events with nothing more than a heartfelt conversation. Regardless, I look forward to seeing the twists to Hagaromo's jutsu. |