Oh god for a second I thought zuko was going to do something else with the dagger at the end! You managed to make a well written story with a single chapter and little to no exposition, that takes talent.

You bought tears to my eyes. I've read every Avatar fics you've created and this is my favourite. So beautifully written. Again, amazing.

So amazing. I love the rhythm of this story, it's kind of like a poem. I thought the ending was just a little rushed but the details and the way you write is so compelling. I also think the hints that you add are so clever!

Correct me if I'm wrong but basically, Zuko never betrays his uncle and he just joins Aang's side and then Katara heals his scar with the spirit water when they're in the catacombs and then Azula kills Aang and she can't save him? I don't know if this is right, just what I was thinking happened.

Btw, I love how you mention Jin. She's an awesome character, albeit a very minor one. I loved this and all your other writing, too.