Reviews for Every Step of the Way
StonerGuru chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Dawg... So Much Tears! I Love your Literally Style, and admire your ability to craft a story. For example, you know where everybody’s hands are at all times, and keep track of their movement without skipping a beat! This is better shown in your later chapters, of course. This definitely has to be the prelude to later chapters like “I’m Getting Used to This” and so on. I just found that out now.

Bravo... Well Done! Once again, I consider this chapter of your story to be nothing short of 100% Canon; and that is the Highest Compliment I can give to a Writer of Fan Fiction. Thank You!
maxii.caulfieldx chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
qt af
Sandt21 chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
For quite some time, I've searched for a romance fix between Max and Rachel. They're surprisingly rare on this site. But this fanfic is the closest I've ever gotten to one, and for that, I thank you. Perhaps you might consider a brief sequel focusing on Max and Rachel's relationship. Yeah, Chloe is there too and I adore her, but Pricefield has plenty of representation on this site. It's time for Amberfield to have its time to shine
P-Ele-R chapter 1 . 8/5/2017
This was so cute and beautiful and happy and also kinda sad because why can't the game be like this, and you did such a good job writing your idea and thank you for that!
zealot123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Damn that was good you should write more I love this pair
BreenieLee chapter 1 . 5/7/2017
oh...my...god...the...perfection. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU write more!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2017
This story is wonderful and cute! I hope you write more of this kinda thing 3 I'd love to read more of these girls being adorable and fantastic...
zealot123 chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
Aww this was great. You should do more I like this trio ship or amberfield
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
This is so beautiful! Definitely enjoy reading this. I'm glad Max have not only Chloe but also Rachel to be there for her but also to each others.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
MAX CHLOE FOR LIFE
xXMajorMonkeyXx chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
So...much... fluff... I didn't want to. . ...but I couldn't stop... so sweet...so beautiful.

Love your work and looking forward to more!