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StonerGuru chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 Dawg... So Much Tears! I Love your Literally Style, and admire your ability to craft a story. For example, you know where everybody’s hands are at all times, and keep track of their movement without skipping a beat! This is better shown in your later chapters, of course. This definitely has to be the prelude to later chapters like “I’m Getting Used to This” and so on. I just found that out now. Bravo... Well Done! Once again, I consider this chapter of your story to be nothing short of 100% Canon; and that is the Highest Compliment I can give to a Writer of Fan Fiction. Thank You! |
maxii.caulfieldx chapter 1 . 5/30/2018 qt af |
Sandt21 chapter 1 . 12/15/2017 For quite some time, I've searched for a romance fix between Max and Rachel. They're surprisingly rare on this site. But this fanfic is the closest I've ever gotten to one, and for that, I thank you. Perhaps you might consider a brief sequel focusing on Max and Rachel's relationship. Yeah, Chloe is there too and I adore her, but Pricefield has plenty of representation on this site. It's time for Amberfield to have its time to shine |
P-Ele-R chapter 1 . 8/5/2017 This was so cute and beautiful and happy and also kinda sad because why can't the game be like this, and you did such a good job writing your idea and thank you for that! |
zealot123 chapter 1 . 6/29/2017 Damn that was good you should write more I love this pair |
BreenieLee chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 oh...my...god...the...perfection. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU write more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2017 This story is wonderful and cute! I hope you write more of this kinda thing 3 I'd love to read more of these girls being adorable and fantastic... |
zealot123 chapter 1 . 4/9/2017 Aww this was great. You should do more I like this trio ship or amberfield |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 This is so beautiful! Definitely enjoy reading this. I'm glad Max have not only Chloe but also Rachel to be there for her but also to each others. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 MAX CHLOE FOR LIFE |
xXMajorMonkeyXx chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 So...much... fluff... I didn't want to. . ...but I couldn't stop... so sweet...so beautiful. Love your work and looking forward to more! |