Reviews for Cinder Brother |
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sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 6/19/2019 Are you going to update this |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 Can you please upload more chapters |
Eternity456 chapter 2 . 1/15/2018 Please continue this it’s interesting |
Snakeskull chapter 1 . 1/5/2018 Sorry for the wait everyone I just been really busy lately finally got a job and researching up on rabbits and snakes. I going to try to buy a cheap laptop on my next payday so hopefully soon I will write a new chapter up soon. Thanks you all for feedback and reading my story |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2018 Are you going to write more chapters about this because I really want to see cinder's brother meet her again and I want to know if they're going to talk or they are going to fight because they're on opposite sides you know |
dnck chapter 2 . 6/17/2017 the whole summer is sealed in Naruto and oz does not know what to do with him is he stupid or something! |
bladetri chapter 2 . 6/3/2017 like XD |
hallowcake chapter 2 . 6/3/2017 Ok, the idea is good and all but the wrkng grammar kinda ruins it. Good idea for a story and try to look for a beta or something. Or proof read it before posting it. This is not a flame and like I said I like the idea so yeah goodluck and have fun. |
bankai777 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017 Will Naruto be allies with Team JNPR. |
Ryujomaru15 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017 Thanks for the shoutout, it was not a problem. Good chapter can't wait for the next one. |
doomqwer chapter 2 . 6/3/2017 oh cool i was look forward to this i look forward to more |
Ryujomaru15 chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Very interesting story so far. Can't wait to see it develop. |
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 1 . 4/7/2017 Awesome start of the story keep it up |