Reviews for Cinder Brother
sammykordy10 chapter 1 . 6/19/2019
Are you going to update this
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Can you please upload more chapters
Eternity456 chapter 2 . 1/15/2018
Please continue this it’s interesting
Snakeskull chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
Sorry for the wait everyone I just been really busy lately finally got a job and researching up on rabbits and snakes. I going to try to buy a cheap laptop on my next payday so hopefully soon I will write a new chapter up soon. Thanks you all for feedback and reading my story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
Are you going to write more chapters about this because I really want to see cinder's brother meet her again and I want to know if they're going to talk or they are going to fight because they're on opposite sides you know
dnck chapter 2 . 6/17/2017
the whole summer is sealed in Naruto and oz does not know what to do with him is he stupid or something!
bladetri chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
like XD
hallowcake chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Ok, the idea is good and all but the wrkng grammar kinda ruins it. Good idea for a story and try to look for a beta or something. Or proof read it before posting it. This is not a flame and like I said I like the idea so yeah goodluck and have fun.
bankai777 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Will Naruto be allies with Team JNPR.
Ryujomaru15 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Thanks for the shoutout, it was not a problem.

Good chapter can't wait for the next one.
doomqwer chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
oh cool i was look forward to this i look forward to more
Ryujomaru15 chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
Very interesting story so far. Can't wait to see it develop.
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
Awesome start of the story keep it up