| Reviews for The Random Hand of Fate |
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   Brother Bov chapter 38 . 7/23 I just realised, that since hos bag is seemingly magghhik, One day he should just suddenly get a disc of what if the emperor had a text to speech device. And just show it around to everyone in the inquisition. |
| Blaze1992 chapter 39 . 7/16 WAIT your plan is for both sides to want him dead?! |
| Powerhouse616 chapter 39 . 7/15 Be fair to yourself, this was a suprisingly long chapter. The plot you've woven is very intricate. which character knows what is key to Jacob's plan, and I don't know how you keep it all straight, especially with heavy scheming. All things considered Blake took that... amazingly well... not much else to say without spending an hour dissecting each scene. I for one can gladly wait patiently for the next chapter, quality over quantity. |
| jetjedi chapter 39 . 7/15 Glorious |
| thefoolswriter chapter 39 . 7/15 the emperor protects cant wait for more |
| Brother Bov chapter 39 . 7/14 Awesome as always Brother. The anxiety increases as always. what will change? I will patiently wait for the next chapter. On a personal note how goes your health with Nurgle's most recent concoction spreading across the world. Hopefully you are okay, if not, push through as always. |
| Zombiedudecolletti chapter 39 . 7/14 By the Emperor I can barely wait to see how the fall will go. The Emperor protects. |
| Brother Bov chapter 39 . 7/14 see the notification. literally scream YEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAH |
| jetjedi chapter 1 . 6/10 Yesssss |
| DanReid4 chapter 1 . 6/7 Only one qualm, Jacob needs to be slightly more competent with his fighting. You described him as oportunistic and brutal, write him that way. Just my opinion, still love the story, characters and their interactions are the meat and potatoes with intrigue amd combat as the seasoning. I love it. |
| DanReid4 chapter 38 . 6/7 Fantastic. Keep up the good work. |
| Guest chapter 38 . 5/16 Loving the whole story please continue! |
| Blaze1992 chapter 38 . 3/15 Bring out the paddle. |
| thefoolswriter chapter 38 . 3/13 Thanks for the chapter really wonder how blake will react to the truth |
| Powerhouse616 chapter 38 . 3/12 Huh, I guess I expected the Dark Angel to throttle them completely and utterly. Kinda went out like a bitch, not even taking one person out. You are trying to juggle wayyy too many characters my friend. Take it down a notch. It's hard to keep track of who's with the group at any given time. What Dante did to Jaques was absolutely brilliant and I wish I could get in people's heads so effectively. Blake is going to have the world crushing down on her... hope she can take it. It's moments like that where you really shine. Character interactions and situations. You do wonders when it just follows one person very closely or a very small group. Overall enjoying the story, can't wait for more. |
