This is interesting! Please update moreeee!

The story seems promising, but I feel that the reactions are a bit too dull. For someone knowing that they will likely not be able to ever see their family/friends again, Natsu Erza and Happy took it WAY too well. They seem to accept their situation and move on way too easily, which is unrealistic in my opinion. In addition, with the way that they appeared, Ozpin seems way too accommodating, even if there is a prophecy of sorts about the door and whatever pops out of it, he should be more cautious about it, and even then as a professor, when he was explaining the situation to his students, he should be more reassuring instead of being like "I dont know what happened either." He shouldnt also be broadcasting the situation of Natsu and Erza being mages from another world out to the world either, especially when there are many dangerous people/enemies lurking about, its illogical. All in all, the premise I thought was interesting, but the overall execution of it could be better. But keep up the good work!

Best,
An Avid Fanfiction Reader

Good story plz continue iy

like XD

Please update!

Story is fine besides some minor errors and inconsistencies. Looking forward to next chapter.

is this gonna get updated soon?

Natsu clearly grew up a little that's good to see.

I hope when Natsu fights Cinder at some point, he eats her Maiden powered flames and becomes super fired-up.

I'm liking the story, but I hope you don't go the harem route. That just gets weird and tends to detract from the actual plot.

Nice

Awesome chapter nice that natsu helped velvet

thanks for update

are we must wait 1 year again or not

sorry thats a joke

I can see why some people would think that Natsu was a Faunus. I cannot wait for the next chapter of your story. Hope you are doing well.

I love the way you wrote this chapter for your story.