Fantastic story! (sometimes you forget to explain things/over-explain things; like Naruto Kawarimi-ing with Laurel...it took me 3 paragraphs to figure out what was going on and then it wasn't actually told to the readers until the end of the chapter.) Other than that, I'm seriously looking forward to the twins actually meeting Tenzo and I'm loving her relationship with Iruka. Kakashi's hilarious and I love Death. :)
Looking forward to more!
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Also Laurel's and Anko's prank on the civvie council had me in tears. I was just imaging the 2-foor long classic green snake floating in the air, nonchalantly terrorizing random citizens.

Then imagine that multiple times over, a shit ton of snakes floating in the air like blimps.

it was a wonderful mental image.

Thank you for writing and I hope you continue to update!

have a good day!

Has anyone one else realized that Orochimaru is basically the Naruto version of Voldemort?

The cursed sealshorcuxes

It's so freaking obvious

Love this, so please update soon!

I've really enjoyed reading your story thus far, even if I AM feeling a bit urgent about her need to get that dratted binding resolved. Sword of Damocles hanging over a Super Weapon's neck, in a village full of sneaky, freaky, power-hungry ninja here!
At the very least, she oughta shove that sucker into a mokeskin pouch ...that...she doesn't have. Rats.

Um there's no ninja telepotation the closest one is the hiraishin

Is this story going to be a Laurel/Kakashi pairing.

I love this! Please continue! Would her 'twin' eventually become a 'new soul' thanks to her connection with Death?

Because slavery is adventurous and humorous. You too should try it.

Really like this story. Hope to read more!

I'm waiting as patiently as I can. But I love this story and I want to see it updated so bad!

This is neat, though now I both want Kurama to be whole again, and I want to see Rei’s reaction to neo-voldeldork (I.e. Orochimaru)

Also the whole master of death thing should make edo-tensei hilarious, not to mention how tobito and Madara are probably in deaths domain

Line theft is never the answer.

This was an interesting chapter only thing that was off how Naruto introduced himself, he'd introduce himself as Uzumaki Naruto never Naruto Uzumaki.

*groan* Dont tell me, the great fuckup Kakashi will be the main love interest ?