I had fun laugh my ass off your a great writer and I hope your well please continue to make perfect fanfics like this one thank you again have a wonderful day

THE FUCKING MOTHETFUCKER COURIER FEELS NOTHING FOR DEATH SERIOUSLY MY COURIER HAS OVER 3000 HUMAN KILLS

The story so far feels really rushed
Show us don't tell show us him helping velvet don't tell us later it happened it removes any connection with the story

Also its a little Cringy

Really? I just don't believe he would feel this bad about it given its the wasteland the people he killed were monsters

Ah I just don't see him hating killing so much given hes from the fallout universe people like him would of died out in the wasteland

I can't think of a rename of hunters of the light yet but I have a few ideas like the Jedi Sith of Remnant or the light that pierces his Shadows and I also have another idea for what else you can write the Arbiter and a female Spartan have a child who is named John like you know after John Spartan 117 who was the Arbiters Ally I want point he thought he could honor his friend and Ally my name is first son after him and this John goes to remnant after becoming a zealot class at the age of 15

He was kind of a whiney bitch, for such a wasteland badass. Looking forward to the rewrite.

not cool

"Oh and magic bullshit, they see his whole life in seconds, love him, and resolve all possible conflict that could happen between sharing a boyfriend!" And they lived happily ever after... Seriously. Let's see... (Depressed suicidal Main hero. Who is also a badass. Has a ton of titles. Can mind meld with people. Has more "mystical power" than anyone else. And every girl wants him, and is also ok with sharing him.)
You appear to be checking quite a few of the bad fanfic signs. Next thing we know he's gonna find out that Crocea Mors is actually the sword of the King of Vale! And whosoever holds the sword, if he be worthy, shall be the King of Vale, and get vaults filled with gold. And let's not forget how you need 20 concubines because "ancient laws say so". Lol. Seriously. Tone it the fuck down, and put some actual good plot into this please. It started well. Kinda fucks up when you start to add the Harem.

Shooting himself in the head won't kill him. He knows that, he's been shot in the head by that exact gun before. And if the Pip-boy is keeping count of his kills... Does that mean that it only started after he got this new one? So how many were on the old Pip-boy?

You ripped off Inuyasha. Negative points.

The stats from the sword... SPECIAL works off of 1-10 with 10 being peak Human ability. Equipping the sword is times 10 so if his STR is 8...its now 80...which is 8 times stronger than the stronger Human. Then times 20 on top of that...

Sword of Divine Providence was stolen...

Somehow the FEV(not the GECK you dolt) maybe him a super-soldier instead of mutant, because reasons. But somehow still ambushed and successfully shot in the head even though he could eat point blank riot shotgun...

was here

Hey are you still going to continue beware beware the dragon art comes and the lone Courier along with your other ones I have harems

You're still continuing the alone Courier cuz I like to know what happens next if that's okay and if you're still doing beware beware of the dragon art comes and any of the other ones like to know please if you can make a Halo crossover 1 when the Arbiter has a sun with a female Spartan that would really cool he'll be half sangheili and half human he'll have a mixture of human and saying Haley armor pieces along with other weapons and stuff

Wtf is this story lol so bad