son videl hissing saying to her boyfriend and husband hey idiot why didn't you just say that you loved me when i had asked you if you like girls with short hair i was hinting to you that i loved you too why do you think i had cut my hair short that i had relentlessly pursued you as both sayianman and son gohan that i wanted to know everything about you or the fact that i had pushed your mouth into my pussy in public got introduced to your mom the hard way and your brother goten the birdee and before you say what you are about to say i don't care if you half alien the only boy that i will ever wrap my legs around is you i will wrap my legs around your face and waist i love you so much son gohan sharpener can go fuck himself

Videl to gohan of course I know that you been in love with me since the first we met and I know that you keep looking at me even when you was pretending to be sleeping in class

J'aime.

That was good.

Awww, that was so sweet! And I really liked it when he was describing how he felt about her. It made feel all mushy inside!

haha its cute

That was really good. I don't understand why you underestimate yourself. You are a really good writer. I know good writers when I read their stories, even though I'm not an expert. But still, for this being your first, I say you are really talented. I bet you are now considering it's the future and all. I hope to read more of your stories. Keep on writing!

WAY KOOL! I CAN'T WRITE ANYTHIN' LIKE THIS FOR MY LIFE!

Hey!

Wow; your first ever fanfic! And it's such a sweet one, too! Wow... The only thing that I can say is 'Wow...' lol D

You hit Gohan's personality perfectly when you had him describe Videl, and then made him add "...Talk about your all time oxymoron!" I thought that it was very good that you incorporated his vast knowledge into everything.

Even though this fanfic was posted about five years ago (whoa... look how far you've come!), I still thought it was simply wonderful. Most people's first fics aren't as good as their most recent ones, but yours was excellent!

Well, I'm sorry that this review isn't as long as my other review (but it's still kinda long nevertheless, right?). Anyways, I really enjoyed this fic.

Keep doing what you do best!

Ladii_Chocolate

Just to let you know reviewing other peoples stories pays off sometimes. Your review of someone elses story led me to you and i'm glad. Thank you for this short but sweet piece.

Ishkabod

love it

Wow... This story was great. It was touching and everything. Well written and no noticable spelling mistakes and everything makes sense, which speaks of great care. You've got talent. Keep up the good work! See ya!

.::cries:: OMG, this was so terribly sweet! It got to me so much. ::sniff:: Wow, this is a perfec atmosphere. I'm sitting here, reading your romance stories, and listening to my favorite station which is now playing all these great love songs. Wow, I have problems. So this was your first fic, eh? Guess you were great right from the beginning. Awesome! But the only problem is.I RAN OUT OF STORIES OF YOURS TO READ! O.O;

Ilove it.

awww cutsies really well done for a first fic!

*sighs again* awwww...