Reviews for Under Gravity-The Skeletwins' Story |
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![]() ![]() Why can’t you just die, you creepy flower-demon abomination. DIE, BILL, DIE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it’s been great reading your story! It was a joy to read, and I wish you the best of luck with what you have ahead of you! Go for it, keep moving forward, but don’t forget what brought you there. Enjoy your life and have fun! -The amazingly insane Psychochiken |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shadowfang, I wish you luck on your original stories. It’s weird. I found Poor Little Souls though A Place For Him. I’m pretty sure that reading Under Gravity was what gave me an interest in Undertale (Gravity Falls is my sister’s thing). I’m over FNAF, too. Now I’m reading Bendy and the Ink Machine stories. Good luck on your original stories. I need to update Howl of the Wolf, Bite of the Tiger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of short, but still great to have a new chapter to read. Kind of sad that Gideon didn’t show until the very end, but someone coming out of nowhere at the last second to help is something of a theme for your stories. At least, some of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was beautiful! I can't wait to see how this battle ends! I wonder why there isn't a news crew and helicopters and stuff though... you'de think they'd be all over this sorta thing. StayAwesome~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() They return... THE ZALGO TEXT! In all seriousness, great fight scene. And now Bill is super mad! I can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I am SO ready for this! Tis gon be amahzin! StayAwesome~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, yeah! Dipper and Mable vs Bill! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, no! Bill is back! Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your chapters just keep on getying better and better!Please keep on going ,this story is awesome! |
![]() ![]() Hey, this story is great! Don't give it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry to hear about PLS is still on other websites. I'm also sorry to hear that this is your last fanfic. Still, good luck with future interests and projects! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry to hear your story was stolen. I do think that it could be a good e-book (better than The Silver Eyes, gah, that story was so boring! We get that they were friends with a missing kid, where are the animatronics?). My sister and I are working on a fanfiction ourselves. It's not FNAF, or anything, but I'm still excited to write it! |
![]() ![]() The skeletwins parents ACTUALLY FIND THEIR PARENTS BY LUCK!? oh this will be interesting |
![]() ![]() Wow. I wasn't expecting that :) |