I’m sure I speak for all of us when I say we love this story. I REALLY hope you update or even see this (even though it’s been years later).

Ugh! How frustrating to find a really fun and intriguing take on Hicstrid and you haven't updated in three Years! Not fair! Though I am hardly one to comment or judge.

I love this story and really hope you continue it. The chemistry between these two is great and the slow burn you've set up for this part is driving me bonkers. And I can't help but think you are setting this up to be dramatic when Hiccup thinks she's playing games and Astrid has sworn off playing games with him.

Such delicious angst!

You ever gonna update?

Are you ever gonna update?

You gonna update or what?

This looks good. As the first part was. It sad that it get abandoned. Hope that you finishing this part

please please please update. This story has been haunting me for ages, I love these charachters

Please update this again it’s so good! I can’t wait to read more of it!:)

Amazing story when is the next chapter coming out?

Omg! Please update again soon, I can't wait for you to continue this, I live itt!

yo i love this story and iv'e been waiting to hear how you finish it btw nice work with the last story.
this story has touched my heart mostly because i have a similar situation going on and i feel like your story is giving me some guidance thank for working so hard to make this story. have fun and let loose!
finish it while you have the chance

Amazing chapter. Can't wait until the next one. Hope you can get over your writers block. I always check every day to see if you updated. Keep up the amazing work 3

I just finished Temptation about an hour ago and have read whats here and... this is the best i have seen in a long time. It was great to watch your work evolve from being all bunched together and run on to the awsome flow that I don't want to stop. I really like your work and I wand MOOOOOOORE!

Love it ! Amazing job i cant wait till the next chapter

good chapter