Reviews for Making Up For Past Mistakes
naruhanaI4445 chapter 25 . 10/5/2019
Well this chapter was short like terrible short. It was more like a trailer than a chapter still good though
Zabaga chapter 9 . 9/21/2019
Next time say it's not a Romance at the 1st chap then i wont waste 9 chapters if i had known at the start i would have put this to the side in my non romance bookmarks for when i wanted to read that genre not find out half way what i think i'm reading is not what i thought i was reading and expecting to develop
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 25 . 7/28/2019
Uh... este fue el capitulo mas corto que has escrito, en fin espero que no dejes abandonada tu historia hay pocas que me entretienen y esta es una de ellas, solo ruego que no pongas a serena como pareja de ash, no es q la odie simplemente par mi es una niña y ash merece algo mejor, Cinthya es perfecta u otra campeona o lider de gimnasio o una elite four...
Xerzo LotCN chapter 25 . 12/11/2018
will ash at any point get the unova starters or some how get the ones he missed before or nope no more ketchum starter luck
also rip traveling companion
i assume its cynthia cause she meet him when he was down at the airport (which i assume she caused cause she likes him)
if she stalking or laying in wait for him and likes him she should just travel with him at least off and on
im not sure which he might want most are trash a couple decent ones a few fighting or an electric type past that none stick out past bird and hm slaves maybe audino idk
Fanfictionranger chapter 25 . 12/9/2018
My guesses of the Pokemon Ash wants:
Tyranitar
Sandslash
Scrafty
Liepard
Solosis
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 25 . 11/26/2018
seems like its cynthia please update again soon
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 25 . 11/19/2018
short
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 24 . 11/19/2018
thats right! show the proper respect to cynthia.
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 16 . 11/18/2018
druddigon should have mopped the floor with axew and it was interesting to know that gliscor knows protect
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 6 . 11/18/2018
Not knowing which Pokémon on which are not as interesting at battling is nerve wracking lol

To much talking during a battle but then again this is a mock one
Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 2 . 11/18/2018
Was never a big fan of Pokémon talking unless it’s with each other from that one episode where they were stuck on an island. Other than my dislike of that I did find the chapter intriguing especially when you mentioned some Pokémon might not cut the training and surprisingly ash will trade his Pokémon since he was completely against it when it was butterfree and ratticate
CCSakuraforever chapter 25 . 11/8/2018
Esta muy bueno el fics se ve interesante más como le hará a Ash en su viaje en unova más que sucederá más los problemas que tiene para conseguir las medallas y los equipos malvados que hacen sus desastres ahí
UltimateCCC chapter 25 . 11/5/2018
Is it Purlion or its evolved form or an Audino?
Gouravsilentreader chapter 25 . 11/4/2018
Finally you update
Nice chapter
Love it
Update next part soon
Mark Andrew chapter 25 . 11/4/2018
Hmm would be interesting if it is Cynthia. She does have her vacation home in Unova. Theres a lot of others it could be with how he meets so many high ranking people. Or could be Riley Gen from Iron Island. Or Queen Illene.
One flame is, I am surprised Alder never mentioned how Ash did battle Koga when talking to Iris. I would think he would have known or heard about his battles. Especially since Ash knows so many higher ups haha. Plus, how he could already be Elite level in strength.
Cannot wait for next chapter! Though this cliff hanger I want to feed to Charizard!
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