I can't lie I've been stuck on this story for a few days barely able to stop my self from reading it.
I love Jaune as a character as much as a lot of people don't like him I love him and people compare me to him quite a lot and I love how he's becoming a badass but also staying true to himself as the story goes on and I hope you continue to write and make more stories like this as I would love to read them all.

I'm kinda disappointed, it's seems like jaune is still a weak pussy and negrodamus is the main character...

I think “Hearts Mended by Flesh” might be a fic you would read.

Typical, claim "it's sexism" or "it's racism" when you point out that something someone is doing is fucked up. I guess in this case it would be "it's sexualityism".

i read it all in a sitting and i can only say this. . . were can i get a pimp hand so i can be the next pimp god

Not really funny, actually kinda sad.

Penny is good girl... I am now sad. Take care of her.

Google docs deletes content that it deems "harmful".
It was found out a week or two ago.

Try searching a thread on it on reddit.

I liked the chapter but there was no way I could tell POV changed other than the speaker. Also this tunnel scene has been going on way too long. Most of the appeal of the story is Jaune and his hand's interactions with other people, and IMO Penny isn't that funny or interesting. Been missing Pyrrah something fierce.

You might be losing internet connection intermittently so it deletes it by accident. There's a plugin for Chrome that allows offline file editing (it will sync when you have internet again). Look it up. Should fix your problem.

Can't breathe... need air!

FINALLY! YES! I HAVE WAITED SO LONG JESUS ALREADY CAME DOWN FOR JUDGEMENT DAY! GOD IS REAL (though I don't follow a religion...) I CAN REST NOW! THANKYOU!

Fuck you man. You're making me like Damus because you're invoking Jaune as honour before reason then Damus being the meta giy who subverts it. Nornally Damus is a dick, but compared to Jaune I'd rather read him.

It appears no one knows what masculine is in this fic.

Wow his dad was a douche