| Reviews for Persona 5: Hoshi to Bokura to |
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   Dasgun chapter 26 . 5/10 ...-0 |
| B1ackAshes chapter 26 . 4/26 Ah, looks like I spoke a little too soon. Ah well, at least a rewrite will be up. I'll be sure to check that out when I have the time. Personally, I greatly enjoyed this story so far. While I can see your point about the pacing, I personally thought your writing and direction of the story was pretty good. I look forward to seeing how you're handling the rewrite. |
| B1ackAshes chapter 25 . 4/26 Oh, well I'm rather sorry to hear that you're not doing well. I hope you stay safe during this pandemic. Overall, I found this to be an excellent chapter. It was quite well written, the characterizations seem on point, and I'm liking the little changes you've been making to canon. Looking forward to reading more; keep up the great work! |
| Shadow of the Abyss chapter 26 . 4/24 fun fact grinding for money is the easiest part of p5r |
| Igor chapter 26 . 4/4 Yeah! Kasumi will appear. Thats wonderful |
| Takedo chapter 26 . 4/4 Rip, but that's ok. I'm excited to see the differences between this and the rewrite. I also can't wait to see the Kasumi FF. |
| RandomFicLover chapter 26 . 4/4 Hey, respect the decision. The story was fun while it lasted, and with the backbone of this story the remake is guaranteed to be better. Thank you for the fic! |
| BrazeRancor chapter 26 . 4/4 Good luck to you with the new project. Only thing I think so say is a reduction in bloat can only be a good thing, it’s something I suffer myself when writing. Can’t wait! |
| luisAM21 chapter 19 . 3/19 Uhh... sorry to burst your bubble, but Panther uses Sub-Machine Guns (which is a fully automatic) |
| DOOT76 chapter 25 . 3/17 Next up: Every story is postponed in favour of a DOOM Eternal crossover. |
| BrazeRancor chapter 25 . 3/18 Thanks for the update. Good to have you back. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/8/2019 So what you are basically saying, is that the stories dead but you don't wanna be called out on it. OK Mr "my stories alive"... |
| B1ackAshes chapter 24 . 9/18/2019 Finally got around to reading this chapter. My backlog of updated fics is too damn high! Overall, I quite enjoyed this chapter. The writing was great, your additions to the plot are certainly welcome and enjoyable, as well as smoothly implemented, and I greatly look forward to the next chapter. It's only a shame that Persona 5 Royal was announced so late as I think that you could've done some great things with the additions to the game. Best of luck in writing the next chapter. |
| Lord of the UnDead chapter 12 . 8/26/2019 i art thou and thou art i. from the sea of thy soul i come forth. i am orpheus master of strings |
| bulk Locke the the grim head chapter 24 . 8/14/2019 great story keep at ot |
