what you writer's brother did for chapter 3 can you ask him to make that into a "abridged version" of this story? it had that kind of "vibe" to it , in the part where they where trapped the "Bicorn" shadows ,akira was like: "Arsene! kill it with darkness!" and the Bicorn was like: "NOPE!" and Arsene was like: "welp,, I'M useless here,,," and akira was like: "well...F**K!" , THAT was funny as well as their reaction to the fake gun acting as if where real THAT was "priceless" the same when Ryuji's persona whacked the shadow knight with his ship! it was really fun! and plzz keep this going it's a good story!

I like how you've kept Joker relatively the same. A lot of genderbend writers change the characters so much, and I kind of get it, Joker is made to be "the player", but in writing, you need to give him/her a personality. A lot of people just go "lol ima give em whatever personality I want", but you've taken what we've seen from Joker in the game and transformed it into a character that's easy to write about, someone with her own personal problems but still the protagonist (does that make sense?)

My only question is if you're still writing for this story or not, have you lost interest? It'd be a shame, I would love to see your take on the entire story, but writing a novel version of the first arc is a challenge in itself. Good luck with whatever you're doing!

I love this story so far plz update again if you can

I love this whole series so far and please continue it if you can!

PLZ continue soon, I love this story 3
Could you add in a bad dream where Kamoshida did drag Akira into his office without anyone to see and did force her to have sex?

Can her love interest be Ryuji please, their aren’t many of those around

I think Shiho's pictures shouldn't be the only thing they see in the hidden room, Akira too

Why not do alternate endings? Like what would happen if Kamoshida had grabbed Akira before she went home and had his way with her? Just an example

well this is interesting.. i sense P3 P FeMC scenarios but in P5 version..although I doubt it will be that direction. Looking forward for how the story going to unfold in this

Rean-Belle of you want more clues in what's going to go down feel free to make an account and message me. I can't say much but I will yell you the direction its going to go.

Ann is the main love interest of P5 so I say pair her and Akira together

Thanks for answering my questions, even though you can't answer them due to spoilers. I won't ask about it anymore, I'll wait patiently and find out when you get to that point in the story then :)

I can't wait to see the next updated chapter, later! ;)

Rean-Belle I have a lot planned for Akira and her relationship with her parents.I can't spoil much for obvious reasons.
But as it stands Akira when she gets the confidence she will talk about her parents negatively. For now, Akira will pretty much remain quiet I will say though a certain feline will be the first to find out.

I'm really new to this, wish I found this earlier. It's a great story so far, I like the female version, too bad they didn't do that for the game, I got some questions for you, just out of curiosity, can you answer them please?

There was something that caught my attention while reading this, Akira's relationship with her parents really is bad, more than bad. In the distant future chapters, how would the others and Sojiro react if she said something really terrible about her parents;
like how they choose reputation over her well-being at all and not believing the truth of their daughter's words, and saying stuff about them that no one would ever imagine her saying?

If her parents heard all of it while calling Sojiro to see how she was doing after being ignored for who knows how long, how would they feel about their only daughter hating them?
(For me I hope it hurts them so much, making them feel really guilty for what happened and regretting their actions and words, especially the father. Maybe when they learned the real truth behind what really happened, they might make it up to her, although it would take awhile to gain her trust again as a family.)

I like where this story is going! Please continue this.

Well shit that just makes me even more excited