That was an awesome, intense chapter. Also a very nice boOK end ending to this short story.
If you ever do revisit these two I will definitely give the story a try.

Very wonderfully written. And all together an excellent story in my opinion.
Thank you for sharing it with us.

dude...awesome...that's all I can say.

Add some romance, a rough pounding, and some yaoi. Mix together for several minutes, let it set, and you have an amazing story like this. 10/10. Hope to see more stories soon.

Nice read can't wait for chapter 2.

Really hope Kevin doesn't become a bottom in this story. The last one was a disappointment, which I blame that one guy for.

I can't wait to read the rest