Dipper Crypte told me that if you do chapter 5, I will do webfanfic on my page. after the 5th chapter, I will do a volume 1 with two scary stories and a PA mini fanfic

I love the idea, but the execution seems… pretty subpar to say the least. Personally, I think it would better for everyone if you took this to a creative writing thread (i.e. spacebattles or sufficient velocity)in order to properly discuss ideas and receive constructive feedback to alter and improve upon the initial outline. I also think that you should hand this over to more capable hands, because the pacing, dialogue, and overall character interaction appears forced thus far.

The Rise of the TMNT series wasn't too bad I think, with a feminine version of Cassey Jones. And have way in the end Splinter say that now that Leo is the leader.

Hi Gem it's Rayman20 again. I wanted to tell you that it's been 6 months since you released Chapter 5 on fanfiction. I wonder if Lincoln is going to train with the turtles to become a ninjas or not in this chapter. And Raph will meet Ronnie Anne and Carlotta in this chapter?

Keep up the good work

The next chapter, Lincoln Lincoln trains with turtles and Splinter to become a ninjas

Is Lincoln and some of his sisters are going to infected with the mutagen it it would be cool

today is the 30th anniversary of the first movie of the ninja turtles released on March 30, 1990

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I clicked on this thing, on your fanfiction, but I can't do it. How do we do ?

Happy new year, Gemturles

How do you think Lynn Sr. and Rita are gonna react to the turtles and splinter?

Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what comes next, Happy New Year!

Good job so far and that is a good idea with what you have planned. Do not listen to what other people think you should do. This is your choice don't have people try to convince you on what they want you to do.

Also to Guest: Also, don't rush him. He's a person, not a machine. He can take all the time he needs to write HIS story. We should be grateful he let us read it in the first place. Also, don't tell him to make Lincoln a ninja. If he wants to make Lincoln a ninja, then will do it of his own will. This is HIS story, not YOURS.

Also, quit trying to use the author for your own ideas. This is not your self-insert fantasy.

To the guest: Dude, leave the author alone. This is his story. We don't know if he plans to have Lincoln be a ninja. If he wants to do it, then that's his choice. And it's his alone.
Don't tell him what to do or how to write his story.

To the people with suggestions the author has his own and he will act on them. If you have your own ideas write your own stories.

Quit being greedy.