This is so good!

Loved it

I really love the idea of Bella going back and getting to redo things. I just can't stand the pairing. I hope you decide to write a story like this with Edward/Bella. I would love to read it.

A truly fantastic story
Thank you I love non-canon stories

Ding dong the witch is dead

this was fantastic! !

A Sequal please?

This story was amazing, I read it in a go.

His story was wonderful! I cried and I laughed! Thank you so much for yet another brilliant story with wonderful characters! Ha! even Vicky got her HEA!

Great story. Love it.

I like the premise of this one. It's something I've never seen. I really enjoyed it

This was so beautiful! Definitely my favorite J/B story. It’s so completely original; full of suspense and just the right amount of originality and twists to canon. I absolutely 100% LOVED this. I can’t believe how complex this was! Thank you so much for sharing!

38. Chapter 38
The End 2/ then LEMATYAS Mauled them with five with child then draind wholliest of them then Too late Mangled with best friends mangled good guaed get her f the suprrace then chained yiou broke rule of crteation of a Lycan race then chained Vedict Deatjh her/their screams was heaerd then then Fire then kidnapped them of the children good we punished you fore reavling with both then took from hrte Her healrg was failing but far too thinner wasteed away then As all of bruises as all of it then then was sickest dying then good IInjuected her with poison with his/they mine then Assaulted but abusive then the force of both then Destroyed her soul stolen the get rhem they are Chained now pets and guard dogs are ours then the then AHerdisease came was Reyerson's Disease was a blood disorder from Amamda Grayson Sarek then too late health took on a toil onto their failig one then was pregnant ribs breaking failimng health thne was dying good once deadf the kids will be ours forever they will serve us as Assassins forever then too late Kidsbitten freekly they wee next with them then the very as all of them fire spreading to their dying failing hearts then Memories erased thennuked freely blw apart good Guiolkty of your crimes in panance mine only yes King Aro we obey ye then Five then took from here then too late blew wre Both then very far of Bellona's Troops herself now a Phoenix Coven Senor ranking higher guard and Super Sailor Soldier was Nuked with the very far to as all good then were Anmesiacs pawns by now they wre apart of the coven then More of them then took lives then it happened bodysuits wre too harrdest smashed them then wre without Blod then then became Starfleet Marine Strongert thannormal the her behavior changed was Vengeful wrathful but was faster but better and dangerous but lethal by now more Agile was ten times greater good we breainwashed yiu with help yu killed them sere then they done to her mind weeraesd Nothingness was left of the blod the five freed then herself was in fact working for the Phoenix Coven with them they wre already Deceasaed from bodies were Avenged but had Falkor's red eyes of Vampoires then smashed then then the Assault and abused onto humans then herself took lives from humans with pointed ears was very strongest feedijng more then neederd blood soth theyu then too late the Newpapers reported missing people the one ws Isabella Marie Black now a guaed blw up with more than as all then suddenly took off for America was wanted for crimes tghen wasnomadic but a wanderer with them to start her coven they found her with the Cullens yiu broke lasw this one broke our rule who created yiu with them the pain then the Felix rid of her with the newborns the they lied and revealed NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Her scrams was head tore her own head with theirs with the Cullens with witnesses then Cruelliest executed her/they for Creation on immortal children the nblewinto purplish ashes with the Lycans wre found guily of the crime get her /they guity of the crimes of murdering then Her lasat final voice Murdred them with them Crurelliest tore her/they to pieces then brought them to the pace good the carnivorous selves emerged bitten freely good then drained blood who done to her/they Volturi too late Ran tests onto them she was abused but assaulted daliiest to more Charile your daughter is not human with them then too late Nothingness from them smashed freely We forbidden to enroll them sliced freely brought them good they never have kids then Ashes to the grieved families then it happened Sarah imprinted was a Shiftpire female in time her phase and steady recovery was complete with them but now they were paler but phased but recovered abnormally looked liker teenagers took on both then Pierced frely stopped then nuked from hallow but husks/shelled corpses with them Brought them good what phased were bitten from both then Killed skinned as coats good with immortal children then were without memorires now murdered then too late herself was really toned but Athleic but very powerful Bella was not human anymore had the same eyes from as all of international animals to American ones dried up then ended up weaken then Sliced freely both with they then lost from here brought them good destroy them they are unfit to live then burnt from here now go then lost from here Alice who did to you what this more toned muscles are Starfleet marine her voice was into chines of her melodic voice We found out they been tortured you are not human then Blown ripped freely brought there good they harbor her grew too strong end them then Screams was heard then lifeless corpses head laid there more guards freed with stolen looks then herself focused her brain and mind the Mostly powerful whirling as a protective weapon Alice she is a Self-Desive mental and physical shield I Sense yiur powes wit theires then too late First hunt in both forms then To very far to morethan as allof them to as all of state animals found yiu die theee who turned you then Executed with them then this one broke law of the PaVampire wore End her/they the toe from hetre Heads lifeless then thennuked freelky then Brought there punished as Cullens they been destroyed get her then chained from with them the her screams for yiur crimes sentenced to death the Murdered brought them Cursed her to suffer true bitter immortality Executed by Felix/they with the good bring the pieces there to home then too late then never was human the both bites wre deepest then popped freely then lost from here Alice they done this act her eyes are fiery Yellow/black where Am I Who Am I Can you remember no it's as all of it gone with his gasp they did this act then in time the very far as all of animals killed then lost as all of color to their skin the the humans had kids again followed by bites then were Turned by them then now nuked but took from here Sliced freely merged with wolves then Smashed then they were Immortal then were really furious under the full moon cursed by Mother Selenity were Galactic Lycans officially sliced freely were as all of them Blown freely then too late sliced brought there as all of them we report of Lycans were bitten by reproduction are born Lycans then found then Destroyed fully time tore freely but took from here As all of them then skinned alive good they are deceased from here then took from them as all of it then too late were from around the world as all of them thenn as all of guards Alice Bella you ok my head is killing me her ears are pointed with richer upswept eyebrows Crunnching! ow her strength is too powerful she replicated newest blood turned a tragically Gaean Forest Green young lady you have Green blood then herself freaked out of the ears and eyebrows Looked like a Vulcan woman too late was paler of the greenish hue of her skin then the Robes was white wearing her longer but expanded jet brown-raven but Black hair/bangs with sides whirled looser in a coilf in religious Vulcan temple Jewelry hands hair neck Alice they been sacrificed one single hand turned upwardly behaving very strangely vowing to Artemis made her a priestess so they gasp they done this young grew up without families had young as well oh my god you were killed then now too late as a Mother wife and great-grandmother and great-great-grandmother and Acolyte-priestess then nuked freely of corpses then brought there good then lost the need to mate killed now unable to breed at all the damages to them lost there forever.

This story is amazing!

Tu historia fue genial, la ame