You have to write a sequel to this! I like Abraxa's evil plans...

This needs a sequel! It was really hot. (I laughed at L's 11 inches long cock w/ 5 inches diameter. I'm sorry but just seem impossible.) Anyway, this is really great.

Dayum, even if it was outside of your comfort zone this was brilliant and well done.

Oh my gosh! This was...ouch! too hot to handle! Haha, I have to admit I definitely giggled at Lucius announcing his dimensions so proudly. I didn't know whether I wanted to smack him for being an arrogant ass or explode in a fiery ball of swoon! This was definitely an interesting premise, with a twist at the end I hadn't seen coming (so to speak hehehehe) thanks for sharing :)

I do so love a rare pairing! Well written and full of potential if you want to continue it.
Hot and steamy with a side of intrigue :)

That was so seductive, wicked, sweet, and charming at the same time! I do have a fascination with Lucius and Lily, especially as precursor to Lumiones. It just works on so many levels for me. I do hope you'll continue with either this or another Lily/Lucius fic - anything that's more than a one-shot for those two. There's not enough of this pairing, and it's my favorite thing after Lucius/Hermione. Beautifully done, as always!

Damn Ththe Malfoy are a rough family. Snooze you loose Potter. Question is does Abraxas want to claim Lily for himself as well? What did he mean trap Lily. Guess the only thing that you can do for these questions is continue this.

Wow! What a hot, steamy scene! That was a pairing I would have never thought I would enjoy. You did a great job. I can definitely see this possibly turning into a short story. I'm curious what devilish schemes Abraxas has up his sleeve and why he set that all up in the first place. Poor Severus, was probably heart broken at the sight.