Brilliant thank you for a great story

That is a nice chapter. The scenes of Harry and Hermione’s day, alternating with John and Luna’s is a good touch. I’m glad that John and Luna have advanced their relationship.

I think Voldemort is affected by H&H’s love.

There is going to be real drama next chapter. I wonder if Ron will really get to the heart of his grievances, that the OBHWF is in danger of not happening.

Please don’t give up on this story. I enjoy it and hope you won’t take forever to update.

TGM

I like the way this story is going. John is a fascinating OC. I like the way Harry and Hermione have fallen so easily into a relationship, the Weasleys be damned!

I like the way Harry is taking to training. It’ll take a while but he’ll truly benefit. DADA class will be/ should be different. Hopefully, no lines or detentions for Harry. Will the DA form again? Will John help?

TGM

I truly hope you write more of this story. I am sad to see that this was most recently updated nearly a year ago, it means I have little hope. I have just really become invested in these characters.

It started good seems to be a Hermione story, where she found a good guy to date. By the end of last he chapter he was all over Luna and paid no attention to the woman he wanted to date.
So gave up, and Hermione would use mum not Mom.

Great story, hope to see more from you soon.

Love both your stories. Keep it up!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Thank you for writing, keep up the good work.

Ron is so much like his mum in this fic.

Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

Good story.

Love it!

In Cannon Harry was tried as an adult, so I think Harry should be treated as an adult and given all rights and privileges as such.

Great story I'm looking for more.

A solid chapter here.