Reviews for Alola to Alola
Kaigu-hunter chapter 16 . 6/30
Good chapter!

If your looking to bring back some of Ashes rivals (For any part of the series that you want), might I recommend : Paul? Despite being Ashes opponent, Paul's personality could show the Alola gang that their are trainers out their that only care for absolute strength & power in a Pokèmon! He's stubborn and sticks to his ideals very well (if I may say) and could show the crew their flaws!

But, if your looking for Ashes rivals to be in the alola league I'd recommend: Tobias! He massacred the competition with only a Darkrai, he's respectful to anyone who could take down said Darkrai, and is Ashes greatest challenge! (In my opinion) If Ash defeats him in the finals, it would prove that Ash is much stronger than he was during the shinnoh league!

Can't wait to see your next chapter! See you!
Guest chapter 16 . 5/13
I read in the games Lily is a fairy type trainer. Is there anything you can do with that information?
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 5 . 4/30
I dont like the idea of Ash's Dewott becoming Samurott, its lose its usual charm
Elay grimm chapter 16 . 4/30
Me gustó sería genial si lo sigues actualizando que bien aparecerá litten si muere su amigo sería genial si Ash le cuenta de los amigos que perdió sería genial si Ash sale con Alexa se que es mayor pero creo que le quedaría o con dwan sería genial si lo sigues actualizando la historia es genial
goddragonking chapter 16 . 4/30
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:
jbadillodavila chapter 16 . 4/29
Va a ser muy buena la aparición de Daisy.
Edmonton58 chapter 16 . 4/29
could you do a bond phenomenon and a water z-move with ash and greninja (same deal with mega evolution and a Z-move).
Poke-ranger21 chapter 16 . 4/29
will ash still get a dusk-form lycanroc?
millerr123 chapter 15 . 4/27
Please please please please update this story because it is such a brilliant story and I couldn't stop reading it.
FoxyKhai0209 chapter 15 . 4/2
It would be nice if Ash had a Riolu and it evolved into Lucario. But instead of male Riolu, try a female Riolu as it might liking Ash very much. Especially when she evolved into Lucario.
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22
Can you ship Ash’s Pikachu with Serena’s Sylveon?9
Pokefan69 chapter 3 . 11/5/2019
With that Harem Ash won't have enough milk for all of them you gotta give the boy a lot ot vitamins and nutrients before the girls suck his life and other things...One or two of Ash pokemons are more than enough to deal with Team Rocket cuz they don't train their mons why release all the ones he has?...
Pokefan69 chapter 2 . 11/5/2019
Welp giving a try to this one cuz I couldn't watch the anime after seeing how hideous Ash new art style was not to mention how childish..Tho good move in making him trade his Tauros for new pokemons and make him bring some old ones the anime always fail to do that..But I think the Z-moves are dumb and trainers look even dumber doing the poses like bro mega evo was more badass in everyway...
goddragonking chapter 15 . 9/28/2019
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
Shogun lord poke burst chapter 3 . 9/28/2019
If ash caught both zygarde and greninja, then who's protecting kalos from those vines
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