Pardon my candor, but I came to this fic because I was looking for erotica. In all honesty, your sex scenes suck, but you're story is really fun. I didn't get what I came for, but I got something better. :)

I may have binged the story this past 3 hours.

I like the fact that Lucifer is trying to get over his family issues, and I like that he's doing his best to be a good dad. I'm looking forward to seeing if Lucifer spoiling them rotten will have an effect on the adults they turn out to be. I'm looking forward to them having to explain the seeming age difference between Chloe and Lucifer. What happens when the kids realize that they're immortal and will watch all their friends and their mother die of old age!

Immortality is an interesting and depressing thing to explore! I've read a few books that have tackled the subject. They're always interesting.

Wow.

lose not loose

This was adorable!

I'm dying at the virile and manly comment lmfao

Amazing story. I was giggling out loud. I hope to read more. You wrote it very well.

Sorry for the previous post. I just discovered the sequel on your home page. Great! More daddy Lucifer!

Did you just give on this? I was so surprised at this ending as you'd marked your story complete. Well, thanks for sharing the 28 chapters; I really enjoyed that your Chloe married Lucifer and had children with him. She's such a clod in most stories and now that i've read some fan fiction i realise that she's rather one dimensional in the TV shows ie just a very beautiful face who says 'no' all the time. I'm so glad you managed to breathe life into her. Great story!

this was a very enjoyable story, but what happens later?

love it.

off to part two i go

Good story. I would like to know what happens next...

Hi! I'm Jolly. I've been reading your stories for a while now. And by that, I mean I've read each -Lucifer- one at least 2 or 3 times. You have no idea how much I've wanted a story where Chloe and Lucifer have a kid and raise them. I repeat, "raise them" because most, if not all, have them having a kid and the story ends. Though I thought this would be the same, that ending gave hope to there being more to come. I love the dynamic between Chloe and Lucifer, I like this idea of them meeting before Chloe got too serious with Dan, so that the story from the TV series actually starts when they have been together on Earth for ten years. I just, I love it.

On a serious note, I did notice that the same day you updated and completed this story, you also published all your short stories that go along with it. It was also the same day that you last updated your profile. Meaning it's been a year since there has been any noticeable activity from you. Not even your favorite stories can really tell me much since they were all published before 2017. Though I'd love for you to come back and continue your story, especially the TV series' story-line with this new version of the crew, maybe even a few more shorts with the twins a little younger then 5-7, I just want to know that you're ok. Even if I don't update for a while, I have a way of showing that I'm ok, so I just hope that you are. Even if you're not coming back to finish your series, as long as your healthy and doing fine, I can happily imagine what happens in the story.

I like the relationship you've created between these characters, and I understand your setting is the USA, where this kind of birth is 'normal', but such a shame to have birthed in this way. Congrats on not going the surgical route.

The last few chapters felt rushed, but they did seem cover the last bits of the story without leaving a cliffhanger which was very much appreciated. I thought the plot was pretty interesting too, I thought the whole idea was rather fascinating and tied really well into the story. Hope to see a sequel or more stories soon!