Wasn't ready for the sexinest but really like it. This one is a keeper.

wow, they have only started dating that day and she is already gonna be pregnant.

Wow, what a great story. Easley one of my top 5 fav Hiccstrid smut stories! Hope u do another one really soon!
Would you also be willing to write a Hiccup, Astrid and Heather one short?

I really enjoyed it never thought I would be a frequent reader and did not realize I read through all of both of your FF of Hiccstrid. There's just never enough anyways thank you for making this and I really appreciate it and all the other people out there did to keep making em :)

A High School Golden Girl who realized, nearly too late-for her and him, that the Diamond her 'friends' had constantly kicked into the Rough and beat down upon, was really someone she, to her own heartfelt pain, had sorrowfully overlooked, ignored and gave no relief to before graduation.

I liked that Alexis came to her senses of her high school 'friends', her ex-boyfriend and the chance she found to really connect with Harper, and have them become friends...and more than friends.

Alexis sensed Harper was more than he hid behind the walls he was beaten behind, but now free of high school politics, she was able to act on what she saw with clearer eyes and pursued the man she now appreciated and wanted to give all of herself to.

Harper, hoping for a fresh start at college, found his past continuing to dog him. But Alexis proved he was going to be free of that history and she was going to help him into his future. With her.

Bonus for her is that Harper's a very caring lover and happens to have a well-kept secret that none of their former high school classmates ever knew about...until that selfie...LOL! And...it's all hers...

CB73

I really like your stories, would love to see more of those :)

okay, i'm just gonna ask it.

why did you give the characters modern sounding american names? It just seems unnecessary.

Awesome one short man and Really well written! I hope you do another Hiccup and Astrid lemon/smut one-shot soon

That was long. The story (to be clear lol). Love how Astrid was such a badass, especially when she asked Thuggory. hahah. It was a fun read. While I understand why Hiccup's name was changed, I was still hesitant with the others but once I started reading, it was easy to adjust. It was hard to put down. It was great!

The names really killed it for me. It's a modern AU and you're changing the names? It's too hard to put the original characters into this story now.

Daymmm! I'm speechless

Wow... that was long and, for all the smut, there was a surprising amount of angst and emotions. Well done! :D

Great story, easy to read and flowed nicely. Thanks for sharing.

You're really good. One of my favorite authors on here. Keep writing!

Love this fic.

Regarding antagonist Snot and Ruff, why not? While they are not "Evil" in the first movie, they are kinda bullies at first. Book Snot was a complete dick until the very end, when he did his one good thing. It's not below them to become antagonists.

Anywho, love the smut. Love Astcup smut even more. Love Astcup smut with good feels and a good ending the most. The breast play was some of the best parts. If you're going to do some more Astcup smut in the future, might I pitch an idea?

Hiccup's mom died when he was very young, like a few weeks old, young. Grew up motherless with a potentially neglectful / abusive Stoick. With the whole obsession between men and breasts, along with a lack of a mother to breastfeed him, Hiccup grew up with an subconscious obsession/fetish for breasts. Enter your Astrid, similar to College-Party-Catalyst Astrid, with full and sensitive breasts, who's outer personality who is a hard badass, but who's inner personality is very nurturing. Kinda mother-like. It would be borderline squick for some people, as well as dealing with a potentially dark place in Hiccup's head. But alot of their sexual interactions focus on breast-play/pseudo-breast-feeding but without the lactation.

So... yeah.

A critique regarding this fic, there was very little focus on Hiccup and his reaction and expressions during some of the scenes. It was there, but I feel like it was kinda unbalanced between Astrid/Hiccup. Like 80% Astrid / 20% Hiccup.

Anywho, love this fic. Love all your fics so far.

Keep up the good work!